Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ punjab-farmers-protests-farm- laws-7094357/ - In the intro, mention the context of farmers’ protest against the Farm Laws.
- In the body, mention the role played by Punjab and the surrounding region in making India self-sufficient in food requirement by increasing the wheat and rice production. Next, mention the problems related to the Green Revolution. In the measures suggest crop diversification and provision of a package by the Centre and State to facilitate the diversification.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to address the farmers concerns and making provisions for the diversification of the crops in the region.
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(Sir, am I writing enough words or should I write more)
Hi Arun
Good introduction.
There are so many spelling mistakes, work on it.
You have met the demand of the question in a decent manner.
You can add a brief conclusion.
Word limit is fine.
Underline keywords and avoid grammatical errors.
Do not get demoralised by the marks, keep writing, you will succeed.
thank you for the review sir