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- In the introduction define what work culture is.
- In the body explain how work culture is the set of collective beliefs, values, rules and behaviour. Explain that culture varies with family, region, social class and hence in work environment.
Cite some differences between the Indian and Western work culture .Highlight the significance of both. - Conclude by reasserting the significance of work culture in general.
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Hi Parakh
Wrong definition of work culture, workplace culture is the environment that you create for your employees.
Similarities are well explained but you have cite the differences in a haphazard manner.
Give proper subheadings for the differences or make a table.
Write differences like equality, punctuality ,creativity vs productivity, difference in wages etc.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Explain briefly that there is need to revamp the Indian work ethics in the current globalized era.
Lackluster conclusion,conclude by reasserting the significance of work culture in general.
You can write it helps in bringing out the best from the employees even in adverse circumstances.
Work on content and basic grammar.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
Rephrase your introduction, write that work culture is set of collective beliefs, values, rules and behaviour which organisation as whole conforms to.
You have explained the differences in a quite comprehensive manner but cite some similarities also.
You have written the feature of work culture in the comparison part, avoid that.
Explain briefly that there is need to revamp the Indian work ethics in the current globalized era.
Then write the significance of work culture.
Adhere to proper structure.
Do not focus only on one part of the question.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Taran
Content is good in the introduction but there are spellings and grammatical mistakes.
Adhere to the demand of the question, write about the similarities first then cite the difference.
Differences are well explained.
Explain briefly that there is need to revamp the Indian work ethics in the current globalized era.
Then write the significance of the work culture.
Work on conclusion,it should be catchy.
Work on spellings as well as presentation of the answers to get better marks.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
Before citing the similarities,explain that culture varies with family, region, social class and hence in work environment.
You have basically point out the features of both the work cultures, instead cite the differences because it is the demand of the question.
Use of flowchart is appreciable.
Explain briefly that there is need to revamp the Indian work ethics in the current globalized era.
Then write the significance of the work culture.
Good conclusion.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi PSR
Write introduction only about the work culture as there is word limit.
You have explained the significance in a decent manner.
Need to add more points in the differences like wages,you can also write that In west, there is major focus on creativity and innovation, while India focuses mainly on productivity.
After citing the differences, mention what India should do to improve its workcuture.
Then conclude.
Try to cover different dimensions to fetch better marks.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have explained the work culture in a comprehensive manner,keep it up.
In the differences part, you have written that relationship with co-workers is more in India-avoid these type of content.
Need to add more points in the differences like wages,punctuality, work-life balance,equality etc.
After the differences, write what India should do to improve its work culture.
Lackluster conclusion, write about the importance of a healthy work culture.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
After the introduction,explain that culture varies with family, region, social class and hence in work environment.
You have explained the differences in a decent manner, but instead of writing relationship point, write more solid points like in west, there is major focus on creativity and innovation, while India focuses mainly on productivity.
After the differences, write what India should do to improve its work culture.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Scan your answer sheet in proper light.
Keep writing !
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Hi Unnati
Rephrase your introduction, write that work culture is set of collective beliefs, values, rules and behaviour which organisation as whole conforms to.
You have explained the differences in a quite comprehensive manner.
After citing the differences, mention what India should do to improve its workcuture.
Good conclusion.
Try to cover different dimensions to fetch better marks.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Improve your handwriting,avoid scribbling.
Keep writing, you will improve.