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- Start by explaining the fact that Indian women have been shouldering a debilitating burden of unpaid household and care work for ages and it’s no different even today.
- In the body discussabout what unpaid labour is. Its connection with Indian women household. Explain in what way the gender gap in time spent is larger in domestic maintenance than employment related activities. Suggest what needs to be done. Discuss the efforts of the government in this direction.
- Conclude with way forward.
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Hi Deepika
Try to write the introduction in one paragraph only.
You have defined the unpaid labour in a good manner.
Rest of the content is also good.
Good structure.
Use subheadings for better presentation.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt,keep it up.
@Parth
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Hi Surya
Good intro.
After the intro, give a heading and define unpaid labor.
Rest of the answer is well written.
Refrain from monotonus answer, give some headings and subheaidngs to present in better.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.