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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/owning-up-to- criminalisation-in-politics/ article32035186.ece - In the intro, cite some data to highlight the intensity of the problem.
- In the body, you can mention the lack of intent from political parties, preference for winnability, issue of enforcement and lack of clarity in the S.C. judgement, secrecy introduced by electoral bonds etc. In the measures mention monitoring the affidavits of the candidates, availability of information about candidates on EC’s website, circulation of information about the candidates, monitoring the compliance with the SC judgement etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the importance of cleansing politics as it dominates other bureaucracy, civil society and media.
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Hi Dakshina
Lackluster introduction, be specific and write about the rising participation of criminals in the electoral process.
When you write about these type of trends, mention source .
Good points in the causes , but also mention about the loopholes in the functioning of ECI.
Suggested strategy is well explained.
Good conclusion.
The first line of the question is about the judgements of SC, write some of them like Public Interest Foundation and Ors. v. Union of India.
Work on handwriting, write legible.
Keep writing !
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Hi Chester
In the introduction, first tell what do you mean by criminalisation of politics.
You have written quite general points in the causes part, mention economic and political causes, quota system ,corruption and loopholes in the functioning of ECI.
Try to add dimensions in your answer to get better marks.
Suggested strategy is well explained.
Lackluster conclusion, write about the importance of cleansing politics.
Try to make your headings small.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Lackluster introduction,first tell what do you mean by criminalisation of politics then quote the data.
Causes part is well explained.
The first line of the question is about the judgements of SC, write some of them like Public Interest Foundation and Ors. v. Union of India.
Before writing the measures, briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Try to cover more aspects of the given topic to get better marks.
Measure part is decent enough.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing.
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Hi Shubham
Good introduction.
You have written quite general points in the causes part, mention economic and political causes, quota system ,corruption and loopholes in the functioning of ECI.
Try to add dimensions in your answer to get better marks.
Suggested strategy is well explained.
Good conclusion.
Structure of answer is decent.
Write ‘and’ instead of &.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing !
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
Try to explain the points in the causes part in one or two lines.
The first line of the question is about the judgements of SC, write some of them like Public Interest Foundation and Ors. v. Union of India.
Try to catch the keywords from the question.
Suggested strategy is well explained.
Good conclusion.
Underline keywords to convince examiner easily.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Amandeep
First thing, work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Lackluster introduction,first tell what do you mean by criminalisation of politics then quote the data.
You have written quite general points in the causes part, mention economic and political causes, quota system ,corruption and loopholes in the functioning of ECI.
Try to add dimensions in your answer to get better marks.
Always try to end your answer with some concluding remarks, conclude by mentioning the importance of cleansing politics as it dominates other bureaucracy, civil society and media.
Work on content, read comprehensively to enrich it.
Underline keywords and improve your presentation to fetch better marks.
Work hard !2
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Hi Mouli
Good introduction.
Causes part is well explained.
The first line of the question is about the judgements of SC, write some of them like Public Interest Foundation and Ors. v. Union of India.
Before writing the measures, briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Try to cover more aspects of the given topic to get better marks.
Measure part is decent enough.
Way forward is good.
Work on space management .
Keep working hard !
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Hi Mehul
Good introduction but need to summarise it.
Write crisp and concise.
Causes are decently explained.
Briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Suggested strategy is good.
Always try to end your answer with some concluding remarks, conclude by mentioning the importance of cleansing politics as it dominates other bureaucracy, civil society and media.
Work on content, read comprehensively to enrich it.
Underline keywords and improve your presentation to fetch better marks.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
You have explained the causes in a decent manner.
Before writing the measures, briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Suggested strategy is well explained.
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt.
Improve your handwriting.
Keep writing !
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Hi PS
Scan your sheet in proper light.
Good introduction.
You have explained the causes in a decent manner.
Before writing the measures, briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Suggested strategy is well explained.
Good conclusion.
Content wise decent attempt.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Uttam
Lackluster conclusion,first tell what do you mean by criminalisation of politics then quote the data.
Causes are decently explained.
Briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Suggested strategy is good.
Always try to end your answer with some concluding remarks, conclude by mentioning the importance of cleansing politics as it dominates other bureaucracy, civil society and media.
Work on content, read comprehensively to enrich it.
Work on content.
Avoid grammatical and spelling mistakes.
Conclude by mentioning the importance of cleansing politics as it dominates other bureaucracy, civil society and media.
Work hard !
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Hi Teja
Scan your sheet in proper light.
Good introduction.
Reasons are well explained.
Before writing the measures, briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Suggested strategy is decent.
Good conclusion.
Underline more frequently.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Sneha
Good introduction.
You have explained the reasons quite comprehensively.
Suggested strategy is decent.
Good conclusion.
Content is good and well placed.
A decent attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Sushmitha
Good introduction.
The first line of the question is about the judgements of SC, write some of them like Public Interest Foundation and Ors. v. Union of India.
Reasons are well explained.
Before writing the measures, briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Suggested strategy is decent.
Good conclusion.
Underline more frequently.
Avoid scribbling.
Keep writing !
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Hi Parvathy
Good introduction but need to summarise it.
Use proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Causes are well explained.
Before writing the measures, briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Suggested strategy is decent.
Conclusion could be better.
Keep writing , you will succeed.
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Hi Unnati
Lackluster conclusion,first tell what do you mean by criminalisation of politics then quote the data.
Causes are well explained.
Before writing the measures, briefly explain the impact of criminalisation of politics on democracy of India.
Suggested strategy is decent.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Improve your handwriting.
Keep working hard !