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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ indian-constitution-absence- of-women-parliament-6705753/ - In the body, mention the debate over the insignificant women representation in the Indian Parliament.
- In the body, mention the various factors delaying the passage of the bill like lack of consensus of the reservation, issue of quota within a quota, opposition from some parties and lack of women as a pressure group etc. In the implications mention the lack of enough women in the debate on the issues concerning women, impact on the status of women etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for women representation in Parliament and so the passage of the reservation bill.
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Hi Samiksha
Good introduction.
You have strong hold over content.
Also mention the need for women representation in Parliament .
Rest of the answer is decent.
Leave some space between the paragraphs.
And if possible try to give subheadings.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing !