Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/discom-loan- package-a-boon-for-power- sector/2026595/ - In the intro, mention the inability of Discoms to meet the UDAY objectives on time.
- In the body, mention high AT&C losses, delays in tariff revision, diversion of funds meant for capital expenditure to service debt, higher tariff PPAs etc. Measures could be the privatisation of discoms, pre-paid metering, separation of agri-feeders, measuring agri-consumption etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the importance of solving the woes of the discoms to make the power sector efficient.
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Hi Taran
Lackluster introduction, mention the inability of Discoms to meet the UDAY objectives on time.
Lack of content in the issues part, you can write-High AT&C losses, delays in tariff revision, diversion of funds meant for capital expenditure to service debt, higher tariff PPAs etc.
In the measures part, along with other points, explain the need of formulation of pragmatic power tariff policy .
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting .
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Do not write the issues in the introduction.
Issues are not facing the sector, instead sector is facing the issues, give proper headings.
First write the issues, then government steps, then way forward, follow a proper structure .
Work on content.
In the issues part, you can write-High AT&C losses, delays in tariff revision, diversion of funds meant for capital expenditure to service debt, higher tariff PPAs etc.
In the measures part, along with other points, explain the need of formulation of pragmatic power tariff policy.
Also mention that there is an urgent need to address the issues of burgeoning outstanding dues of discoms towards power generators and stressed projects that are being dragged under insolvency proceedings.
Read comprehensively to improve your content.
Work hard !
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Hi Dakhsina
Lackluster introduction,mention the inability of Discoms to meet the UDAY objectives on time.
You have explained the issues in a comprehensive manner.
Measures are well explained.
Give some way forward like there is an urgent need to address the issues of burgeoning outstanding dues of discoms towards power generators and stressed projects that are being dragged under insolvency proceedings.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Work on handwriting.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Briefly define discoms, you can write that discoms are responsible for buying electricity from the generation companies and selling them to consumers.
Avoid using short forms like AT&C losses, write properly- Aggregate Technical and Commercial (AT&C) Losses.
You have covered the issues in a decent manner.
Suggested strategy is well explained.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Unnati
Write short introduction, simply mention the inability of Discoms to meet the UDAY objectives on time.
You have explained the issues in a decent manner.
How DBT can help in tackling the financial losses of discoms ?
Lack of content in the measures part,along with other points, explain the need of formulation of pragmatic power tariff policy.
Also mention that there is an urgent need to address the issues of burgeoning outstanding dues of discoms towards power generators and stressed projects that are being dragged under insolvency proceedings.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Avoid using short forms.
Work hard .
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Hi PS
Scan your sheet in proper light.
Good introduction.
You have written the issues two times, merge them under one heading and then write under different subheadings.
Issues are well explained, keep it up.
You have explained the measures in a decent manner.
Avoid using short forms.
Give some way forward like there is an urgent need to address the issues of burgeoning outstanding dues of discoms towards power generators and stressed projects that are being dragged under insolvency proceedings.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.