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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/contesting- neighbours-revised- geopolitical-playbooks/ article32947431.ece - In the intro, mention the balancing act of diplomacy performed by India in maintaining the ties with countries of the region.
- In the body, mention how in past India and China was similar and characterised by the policy of non-interference in the politics of the region and how India maintained relations with the rivals in the region. In the next part, elaborate on changing Chinese approach in the region.
- Conclude by mentioning the importance of the region for India and need to preserve the ties with the region.
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Hi Kaushal
I am not able to read your answer, its blurred.
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Hi Divya
Answer is well started.
First write the significance of the region, you can write –
Significance of West Asia for India and China-
Strong economies: Despite entanglements in the Yemen war and general tensions between the Gulf states and Iran, the likes of Saudi Arabia, the UAE and so on have maintained relatively strong and stable economic progression.
Israel’s recent peace accords with the UAE and Bahrain add much further weight towards a more stable Gulf region.
Then come to similarities and all.
Try to diversify your answer to fetch better marks.
Use headings and subheadings.
Keep working hard.
Israel’s recent peace accords with the UAE and Bahrain add much further weight towards a more stable Gulf region.
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Hi Somasis
First thing, use a good pen.
The ink is getting imprinted on the other page also.
First give proper introduction.
Rest of the answer is good.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by mentioning the importance of the region for India and need to preserve the ties with the region.
Content wise good attempt.
Work on presentation, leave proper space between the lines and paragraphs.
Keep writing, you will improve.
Thankyou. Sorry for the ink imprinting…. am using low quality sheets. Will improve on this
Can you please guide me on a suitable intro on this topic?
You can start like-
After successfully implementing a “Look East” policy to promote trade and investment with its Asian neighbours, India has adopted a similar policy toward West Asia. Then write the significance of West Asia for India.
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Hi Vinay
Answer is well started.
You have met the demand of the question in a decent manner.
Structure is also good.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Keep working hard, you will succeed.
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