Mentors Comments:
1. Mention key statistics on the state of poverty in India
2. Discuss how various programs failed, leading to continuing poverty and deprivation
3. Suggest solutions for poverty and inequality alleviation.
Answer:
India continues to have a large population, which is certainly, not able to afford basic things, in spite of multidimensional poverty almost halved between 2005-06 and 2015-16, climbing down to 27.5%. According to the last released official data, in 2011, 268 million people were surviving on less than $1.90 a day.
Following are the reasons for the continuance of poverty despite being the main agenda of successive govts and number of poverty alleviation programs:
Out-of-Pocket expenditure on ‘Utilities’ like on electricity, transport, health, etc.
High Income and Wealth Inequality: According to latest Oxfam Study, India’s top 1 percent holds 51.53 percent of the national wealth whereas the bottom 60 percent, the majority of the population, own merely 4.8 percent of the national wealth, indicating a huge difference in the income level of people.
Urban Poverty:
1. When people in rural areas don’t find their work any more gainful, they leave their villages in the hope of getting some work in urban areas. But once they reach the big cities, they find it difficult to meet their ends,
leading to the situation of poverty.
2. Even the well-developed cities are not immune to poverty. Slums in cities like Mumbai is an example.
Low Productivity in Agriculture: A major reason for poverty in the low productivity in the agriculture sector. The reason for low productivity is manifold. Chiefly, it is because of fragmented and subdivided landholdings, lack of capital, illiteracy about new technologies in farming, the use of traditional methods of cultivation, wastage during storage, etc.
Underutilized Resources: There is underemployment and disguised unemployment in the country, particularly in the farming sector. This has resulted in low agricultural output and also led to a dip in the standard of living.
Low Rate of Economic Development: Economic development has been low in India. There is a gap between the requirement and the availability of goods and services.
Price Rise: Price rise has been steady in the country and this has added to the burden the poor carry. Although a few people have benefited from this, the lower-income groups have suffered because of it, and are not even able to satisfy their basic minimum wants.
Unemployment: Unemployment is another factor causing poverty in India. The ever- increasing population has led to a higher number of job-seekers. However, there is not enough expansion in opportunities to match this demand for employment.
Shortage of Capital and Able Entrepreneurship: The shortage of capital and entrepreneurship is making it harder to increase production.
Social Factors: Apart from economic and commercial, there are also social factors hindering the eradication of poverty in India. Some of the hindrances in this regard are the laws of inheritance, caste system, certain traditions, etc.
What needs to be done?
Redefine Poverty: Poverty lines have to be recalibrated depending on changes in income, consumption patterns and prices. India needs to use the poverty line for middle-income countries which is around Rs 75/per day, 68% higher than the Tendulkar committee.
Focus to be shifted on public goods rather than subsidies: The drive to eradicate poverty should now move on from ending hunger to making people able to take advantage of opportunities of growth by providing education, health, infrastructure, and housing.
Redistribution of growth dividend: Economic growth should be made more inclusive so that it leads to the alleviation of inequality.
Investment in Agriculture by the government is necessary to decrease rural poverty. Subsidies address only short-term issues. Also, there is a need to develop technologies, with the help of which farmers can practice all-weather agriculture.
Like Costa Rica, there is a need for multi-stakeholder commission with both government and the private sector to incorporate the MPI as an official measure for allocating resources and evaluating social programs.
India will have to sustain efforts in reducing deprivations across multiple dimensions to eliminate poverty. The MPI affords India the opportunity to track poverty and deprivations in a more nuanced manner and continue the battle to improve the lives of millions of its citizens.
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Always underline important points.
Overall very good answer.
The main body is excellent in terms of depth, coverage, and dimensions.
The explanation is short and crisp.
The structure is very good.
PFA.
Hi Gourav
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The discussion after the intro is very academic and not suited for the demand of the answer.
Rather discuss the prevailing condition of multidimensional poverty like social indicators and factors.
The 2nd part is very good.
It has all the necessary elements needed for the discussion.
Good presentation.
Way forwards are superb.
Please review and revert.
Thank you
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Very poor presentation. Intro is too big for a GS answer. Ideally paragraphs fro intro and conclusion should have only 3 4 statements that are not big.
No subheading in the answer denoting the direction of the discussion.
No point in having good content when your execution is poor.
This idea of large paragraphs are not even suited for essay. If you want good marks in the mains exam then you have to stop this style because your copy will be among 44000 odd GS copies. Hence you have to make sure that examiner takes interest in your 80 off answers and with these lengthy paragraphs, they will not go deep. That is why bullet points, flowcharts, diagrams, and tabular form are suggested by all the toppers in the main body of the answer in the mains exams.
COntent is ok.
Kindly review.
@tanya Agarwal
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No need to discuss the background of all the schemes and efforts since independence. That is totally not called for.
Rather discuss the prevailing condition of multidimensional poverty like social indicators and factors.
The 2nd part is very good.
It has all the necessary elements needed for the discussion.
No concrete way forward in the answer. Always give way forward.
Good language.
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Hi Sumona
Too lengthy answer.
It is like reading an essay on poverty.
Maximum take 2 and half page for 15 markers or 250 words questions.
Write a unified intro.
The discussion on the “reasons for poverty in India” and multidimensional poverty should be done after intro.
Read the mentor’s comments before attempting any question in order to get the structure of the answer. In this question, it:
Mentors Comments:
1. Mention key statistics on the state of poverty in India
2. Discuss how various programs failed, leading to continuing poverty and deprivation
3. Suggest solutions for poverty and inequality alleviation.
No need to discuss al the facts and numbers. It makes the answer too academic and technical.
Poor structuring.
Read the model answer.
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Good structure.
The answer is well explained.
Language is crisp.
The answer doesn’t suffer from being too technical and over-explanatory.
The content is very good.
Very good way forwards.
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Hi Sahithya
Very big intro. Avoid this habit.
After intro, briefly discuss the prevailing condition of multidimensional poverty like social indicators and factors. Also, mention some of the measures and policies regarding poverty alleviation
The rest of the answer is fine.
Good content there.
Decent way forwards.
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The intro and discussion after that are good.
Then mention some of the measures and policies regarding poverty alleviation.
The points regarding the reasons for the failure for all the steps are not deep and you need to put more content. This is a very lengthy topic. read the model answer for these points.
Good way forwards.
Language and explanation are very good.
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Very big intro. Avoid this habit.
After intro, briefly discuss the prevailing condition of multidimensional poverty like social indicators and factors.
Also, mention some of the measures and policies only briefly and do not pick faults in each of them as you did in the main body. That is the wrong style.
After this, separately discuss the challenges with overall measures in various dimensions like governance, implementation, health, and education factor, etc. read the model answer.
Way forward can be improved.
Read the model answer.
Always read mentor comments before attempting the answers.
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Good intro.
The 1st part is handled well.
Points in the 1st part are well placed.
The points regarding the failures and reasons for all the steps are not deep and you need to put more content. This is a very lengthy topic. read the model answer for these points.
Good way forwrad.
The structure of the answer is very good.
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