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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/reforming- indias-digital-policy/ article31966403.ece - In the intro, mention what constitutes digital services.
- In the body, mention the significance of digital services in driving the Indian economy and the growth potential it holds. In the issue, trade uncertainties in the U.S., government regulation, lack of policy, and the issues in the proposed policy could be mentioned.
- Conclude stressing the need to encourage and facilitating the growth of the digital services.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Avoid drawing a line between the introduction and body of the answer.
Write about the multi-sectoral utility of digital services ,from healthcare to retail distribution to financial services.
In the challenges part,you have written quite general points,mention three pending measures in digital services
-The Personal Data Protection Bill (PDPB)
-The e-commerce policy
-The Information Technology Act Amendments
Try to diversify your answer.
Way forward and conclusion are decent enough.
Avoid using short forms in the answer.
Improve your handwriting.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Taran
Rephrase your introduction.
You have explained the issues in a good manner.
Some good points are there in the challenges,but mention about the three pending measures in digital services-
-The Personal Data Protection Bill (PDPB)
-The e-commerce policy
-The Information Technology Act Amendments
Try to manage your space, you have to write the way forward also.
Try to diversify your answer.
Write in the way forward that India needs to attract investments,foster Indian innovation ,good governance in the digital sphere etc
Good conclusion.
Keep writing.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
You have explained the importance of digital services in complete one page,try to summarise it.
Issues part is well explained.
Always write some way forward to get better marks.
In this ,you can write that India needs to attract investments,foster Indian innovation ,good governance in the digital sphere etc.
Concluding remarks are good.
Work on handwriting.
And use headings and subheadings wisely.
Keep writing !
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Hi Deepika
In introduction, also highlight the importance of digital services.
In importance part, write the utility if digital services like multi-sectoral utility of digital services ,from healthcare to retail distribution to financial services etc.
Some good points in the issues part but also explain about the Personal Data Protection Bill and e-commerce policy.
Always try to write some way forward to get better marks.
In this ,you can write that India needs to attract investments,foster Indian innovation ,good governance in the digital sphere etc.
Concluding remarks are good.
Avoid scribbling.
Follow a proper structure.
Work hard,keep writing !
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Hi Kritika
Good introduction.
You have written quite general points in the importance part, update it with present pandemic times like digital services are filling gaps when national or global emergencies interrupt more traditional modes of commerce. Ex: Telemedicine during COVID-19 lockdown.
How promotion in use of internet shows importance of digital services ? Instead write the multi-sectoral utilities of digital services.
Employment problem is not a challenge in this context, write about the difficulties we are facing in maintaining a sound digital policy.
Brainstorm before writing.
Give some way forward like India needs to attract investments,foster Indian innovation ,good governance in the digital sphere etc.
You have to work on content as well as structure.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi NJ
Good introduction.
You have explained the importance and issues part in a decent manner.
Before writing what India should do, give a subheading to present your answer better.
Content is good and well placed,keep it up.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting and avoid scribbling.
You have the potential,you can join our Mains Guidance Program for quality enrichment of your answers.
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Hi Sumona
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart is appreciable,but try to make it little neat.
Many of your sentences need to be rephrased, work on basic grammar.
You have covered diverse aspects in constraint part,keep it up.
Write some way forward before concluding.
In this you can write that India needs to attract investments,foster Indian innovation ,good governance in the digital sphere etc.
Concluding remarks are good.
Work on handwriting.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing!
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
You have covered the significance part in a decent manner.
Write importance of digital services in this pandemic time too.
Some good points in the challenges part but write about the Personal Data Protection Bill and e-commerce policy also.
Write about the issues generated in digital services due to the challenges in Indo-US bilateral relationship.
Try to cover more dimensions in your answer to get better marks.
Concluding remarks are good.
Work on handwriting and presentation.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing !
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Hi Vinay
Good introduction.
You have covered the importance part in a decent manner.
Write importance of digital services in this pandemic time too.
You have explained the issues in digital services in a comprehensive manner.
Write some way forward before concluding.
In this you can write that India needs to attract investments,foster Indian innovation ,good governance in the digital sphere etc.
Concluding remarks are good.
Work on handwriting,avoid scribbling.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing !
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Hi Vishesh
Good introduction.
You have written quite general points in the importance,write like digital services have become critical to every 21st century economy given that the world is at the doorstep of fourth Industrial revolution,
even in the midst of the COVID-19 pandemic, investments in digital services continue to flow at record levels globally, outpacing investment in nearly every other sector.
Brainstorm before writing !
Always explain your subheadings in one or two lines.
Write some way forward before concluding.
In this you can write that India needs to attract investments,foster Indian innovation ,good governance in the digital sphere etc.
Concluding remarks are good.
Write neat and legible, work on presentation to get better marks.
Work hard,you will improve.
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