Mentor’s comment-
- Provide introductory lines on earlier Indian societies which were mostly joint or extended.
- In the body give reasons why Indian families were joint or extended earlier. Explain why and how industrialization and urbanization changing family structure. Mention negative changes also mention positive changes brought by it like effect of it on women in family.
- Provide for a balanced conclusion and prescribe innovative way to preserve Indian family set up.
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Hi Samiksha
Scan your answer in proper light.
Answer is well started.
Your answer looks monotonous, use proper headings and subheadings to fetch better marks.
Content wise good attempt, just need to work on presentation, try to present your answer in better structured manner.
Thumbs up for content.
Keep working hard!