Mentor’s comment-
- The intro mention the recent passage of the bill in the Lok Sabha and Rajya Sabha.
- In the body, mention the changes made by the amendment act such as increasing the duration for termination of pregnancy and changing the term from married woman or her husband to any woman or her partner etc. In the issue of taking into account bodily autonomy mention that the act stipulates conditions for pregnancy which results in allowing pregnancy only when needed and not when the women want it. The bill also has an ableist approach by prescribing foetal abnormalities as a ground for termination of pregnancy.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to take into account the bodily autonomy of the women in the matters of termination of pregnancy.
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Hi Komal
Good intro.
Important provisions are discussed in a good manner,
Challenges are discussed in a good manner, you can also mention that there is a shortage of qualified doctors and despite the new law, the access for women to safe abortions may still be impaired.
Avoid writing in long paragraphs.
Content wise good attempt.
Good structure.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep working hard.
Try to write all the four answers.
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