Mentor’s comment-
- Brief about the Gandhi’s Talisman in the introduction.
- In the body explain in what different ways the principle is applicable in to public services such as; framing inclusive policies, judicious utilization of resources, provisions for the marginalized etc. Present real life examples to justify the same.
- Conclude with importance of the Talisman and its importance to the entire world
@Parth
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Hi Surya
Good intro.
In the importance, mention points like-
– Framing inclusive policies.
-Special provisions for the marginalized.
-Spiritual awakening.
Work more on content.
Use subheadings.
Decent structure.
Keep writing.
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@Parth
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