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- In introduction define what you understand by scientific temper.
- In the body first explain the role of science in life. You can answer such questions with suitable examples; from the article presented the best example is that of COVID-19. Explain that an unexpected outcome of COVID-19 is the growing awareness of how disease is transmitted and what might be done to prevent this; this is the rise of a good public culture in the country and it sets an example of growing scientific temper in the country.
- Conclude by reasserting the importance of scientific temper and a culture that promotes and propagates it.
Please review the answer.
Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Good use of flow chart.
Explain how the richness of the tradition of argument has shaped India’s social world and the nature of Indian culture.
Some good points but try to add more like in the importance of scientific temper you can write it will help in reducing the intolerance in the society. E.g.: Killing of rational thinkers like Narendra Dabholkar,MM Kalburgi etc.
Try to substantiate your content with suitable examples to get better marks.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
You have discussed the body of the answer in a good manner.
Well structured answer.
Content is decent and diversified.
Try to add examples to substantiate your facts.
Explain briefly why scientific temper is essential for bringing about social, economic and cultural transformation of our country.
Good conclusion.
Overall good attempt.
Keep writing.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Try to use headings and subheadings for better presentation.
Like in this question,you can write heading like importance of scientific temper,why public culture needed to inculcate scientific temper etc.
You can also add points like there is a need of nationwide science policy which should be able to anticipate problem areas, devise course correction.
Well diversified content.
Avoid scribbling.
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt,keep it up.
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Hi
Good introduction.
You have covered wide aspects with proper subheadings,keep it up.
Content is good and well placed.
You can also add points like there is a need of nationwide science policy which should be able to anticipate problem areas, devise course correction.
Overall a good attempt.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing!
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