Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction briefly explain that effective management of public health emergencies demands open and transparent public communication.
- In the body define transparency and accountability first.
Explain why they become important in public health management systems and disease outbreaks.
You can present the case of COVID-19 or severe acute respiratory syndrome (SARS) crisis of 2003 and highlight the importance.
Explain that Information should be communicated in a transparent, accurate and timely manner.
Discuss the concerns – what if the system is not transparent and accountable. - Conclude by reasserting significance of it.
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Hi
Good introduction.
You have covered wide aspects with proper subheadings,keep it up.
Content is good and well placed.
You can also add points like there is a need of nationwide science policy which should be able to anticipate problem areas, devise course correction.
Overall a good attempt.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing!
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