Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/parliament-and- its-panels/article32613874.ece - In the intro, mention the important role played by the committees in deliberation on any topic.
- In the body, mention the limits of the house to discuss the topic in-depth due to various limitations and how committees can deal with the issue in detail. Next, mention how committees also help in avoiding the hasty legislation. In the next part, discuss the provision of two years fixed tenure to the departmental committees and issues with it as discussed in the article.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to strengthen the role of committees.
tiwarisamiksha6@gmail.com
Hi Samiksha
Lackluster introduction, briefly explain what are parliamentary committees.
You have deviated from the demand of the question, instead of writing about estimates committee and all, mention the limits of the house to discuss the topic in-depth due to various limitations and how committees can deal with the issue in detail.
Try to cover various dimensions to fetch better marks.
Avoid monotony, use headings and subheadings to present your answer in a structured manner.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Leave proper space between the paragraphs.
Keep working hard, you will improve.
Shanu7109@gmail.com
Hi Vedanta
First thing, try to complete your answer in maximum two pages.
Adhere to word limit and space limit.
Lackluster introduction, briefly explain what are parliamentary committees.
Your answer is looking like a sum of maths, write complete sentences.
Work on content, read comprehensively to enrich it.
Avoid using short forms.
Explain how committees also help in avoiding the hasty legislation.
Work on conclusion, conclude by mentioning the need to strengthen the role of committees.
Work hard and do not get demotivated by the marks, keep writing, you will succeed.