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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/the-perils-of-follow- the-leader-syndrome/ article31909353.ece - In the intro, briefly mention the purpose of the Act.
- In the body, the institutional provision under the act at the national, state and district level has to be mentioned. At the national level there is NDMA, NEC, NIDM, at state level there is SDMA and SEC at district level there is DDMA. In shortcoming and challenges, you can mention the Disaster Response Fund and failure in dealing with floods in Kerala and Uttarakhand and CAG report blaming it for failure in implementing flood mitigation measures.
- Conclude by highlighting its importance to deal with disasters.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Use of flow is a good thing but try to make it neat.
Before writing shortcomings and challenges, briefly explain the relevance of DM Act.
Improve your content.
In challenges, there are some good points but you can add more like there is an absence of an institutional framework at the Center/State/District level, poor inter-sectoral coordination etc.
In conclusion,mention why India needs a strong disaster management agency.
Work on writing language.
Keep writing.
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Hi Teja
Good introduction.
Good use of flow chart,thumbs up !
Mention some relevance of the Act then move to shortcomings.
You have discussed the shortcomings part in a good manner.
Way forward part needs some good point like anticipatory governance, emphasizing studies that embed foresight and foster citizen awareness etc.
Work on basic grammar.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Lackluster conclusion,mention the need of disaster management Act in India.
Keep writing ,you will improve.
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Lackluster introduction,it should be catchy.
Write why it is formed.
You have mentioned only shortcomings ,there is no way forward or suggestions.
You can write like disaster preparedness should be focused on meeting the immediate contingency, implementing a conceptual, long-term rehabilitation strategy while maintaining an ethnographic understanding.
Adhere to the proper structure of the question.
Good conclusion.
Avoid scribbling.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Vishesh
Lackluster introduction,mention briefly the purpose of the Act.
The framework part is good.
In the shortcoming part,there is a need to add more points like lack of an early warning system, slow response from relief agencies, lack of trained/dedicated search and rescue teams.
Work on content.
Way forward is missing,mention some suggestions to overcome these challenges.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Lackluster introduction,mention briefly the purpose of the Act.
In the challenges part,you have mixed the challenges and way forward, mention way forward under a different subheading for better presentation .
And add few more points in it like there should be public investment in risk reduction. Tax and spending policies need to be flexible, to allow rapid redeployment of spending when needed.
Improve your content and diversify it.
And in conclusion mention why India needs this Act.
Read comprehensively to enrich your content.
Work hard,you will improve.
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