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- Quite straightforward questions and these types of questions are common in the Art and Culture section. The requirements of the questions are clearly depicted and the keywords are not hidden. There will be two parts to the answer. First dealing with key features of the Mughal paintings and second discussing the reflection of these paintings.
- Briefly describe the Mughal school of painting in the intro and then in the first subheading discuss the key features of this school of thought. This is quite easy and all the materials on Art and Culture cover this topic.
- Tricky is the second part where you have to discuss how these paintings showcased the society, politics, and economics of the era. Take a cue from the images and you will remember that most of them depicted royal courts, hunting, wars, royal couples spending time, foreign dignitaries, saints preaching to common people, a celebration of Holi and Diwali, calf and lion sitting beneath emperors, etc. So think of these and you will get the idea that these themes depicted that society was secular and harmonious, royal proceedings had their protocols and women were not in the proceedings, trade with foreign lands existed, calf and lion depicted justice in the society, etc. Base your discussions on these lines.
- Simply conclude the answer by summarising all the points of the answers and tell how this era was a golden era for the paintings in India.
Answer:
Origin of Mughal School of Paintings is a landmark in the history of Indian paintings. The school originated in the reign of Akbar. The origin of the Mughal style is was a result of the synthesis of indigenous Indian style of painting and the Safavid school of Persian painting. Mughal paintings were a unique blend of Indian, Persian and Islamic styles. The earliest example of the Mughal style is the Tutinama (‘Tales of a Parrot’) Painting. The reign of Akbar is known for the initial works of Mughal School done by Mir Sayyed Ali and Abdus Samad Khan.
Key Features of Mughal Paintings:
- The Mughal pictures were small in size and hence are known as ‘miniature paintings’.
- Though the Mughal art absorbed the Indian atmosphere, it neither represented the Indian emotions, nor the scenes from the daily life of the Indian.
- Hence, Mughal painting remained confined to the Mughal court and did not reach the people.
- The Mughal rulers brought Persian painters with them. At the same time, they patronized Indian painters and the collaboration between these two schools of painters resulted in the synthesis.
- Apart from Persian books of fables, themes from Mahabharata, Ramayana were also selected.
- Indian scenes and landscapes came into vogue.
- Paintings were based upon close observation of nature with high aesthetic merit.
- Under Jahangir, the Mughal school paintings acquired greater charm, refinement, and dignity.
- The emperor Jahangir had a great fascination for nature and took delight in the portraiture of birds, animals, and flowers.
- Inspired by their overlord, the Mughal courtiers and the provincial officers started patronizing the artists trained in the Mughal technique of painting.
- The artists who were employed in the Imperial Government were known as the first-grade artists. The works accomplished by these first-grade artists is known as the Imperial Mughal Painting.
- Artists available to the provinces were of inferior merit, thus, the works accomplished in the provinces were known as ‘Popular Mughal’ or ‘Provincial Mughal’ painting, which possessed all the important characteristics of the Imperial Mughal painting with some inferior quality.
Reflection of contemporary socio-cultural and political realities in Mughal Paintings:
- Painting activity in Mughal cultures was the most visible and tangible sign of dynastic power, wealth and prestige.
- Paintings served to communicate ideas about the kingdom and the power of kings.
- These paintings are known to speak the reality of the daily life of the imperial court.
- One of the striking features of Mughal paintings while showcasing imperial courts is the near absence of females from the court. Hence became to be known that females were rarely permitted to appear in open courts and they were rarely assigned roles in courts.
- The paintings portrayed the emperor, his court and the people who were part of it and showed constant tension between rulers and representatives of the Muslim orthodoxy.
- The paintings contain many examples of the Mughals’ interest in the Hindu faith of their subjects, including beautifully illustrated translations of the Mahabharata and the Upanishads
- Paintings drew upon many sources to show that the power of the Mughal kings came directly from God as shown through the glow or halo behind the emperors.
- A number of symbols were created for the visual representation of the idea of justice which came to stand for the highest virtue of Mughal monarchy.
- The motif of the lion and the lamb (or goat) peacefully nestling next to each other signified a realm where both the strong and the weak could exist in harmony.
- We get the idea of the process of redevelopment of music in Indian culture through Mughal paintings.
- Paintings of the time depicted the social contract between royal families and commoners through the scenes of courts where the distance between ruled and rulers differed in each painting of different rulers.
- Hence one can see how close a ruler was with his subjects or how adored he was by the common people.
- It showed the level of connect between rulers and masses as well as the people of the court.
- The level of secularism in the Mughal paintings up to the era of Shahjahan showed the level of tolerance of rulers towards other religions and cultures.
- Some paintings depict foreign ambassadors which tells Mughals had strong foreign connections and maintained constant touch with the outer world.
- The presence of the foreign ambassadors also tells that Mughal rulers had active trade connections with foreign countries.
- Mughal portraits of birds, animals and flowers set in their natural habitat can be seen as one of the earliest scientific studies of the animal world.
Mughal Paintings that have been encouraged from generation to generation are very important as they successfully depict the life of rulers at that time. It shows the political and social condition of the people at that time also, they portray social and courtly customs in these paintings. In short, these paintings are a clear depiction of the Mughal times and tells great stories. This ear gave new life to the Indian form of painting which was carried and patronage by provincial nawabs after the decline of the Mughal empire.
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Hi Prateek
Welcome to the Daily AWE program.
Very good intro.
But do not give the impression that it is a bullet point. I am talking about the arrow pointed in the intro.
Near perfect attempt in terms of all the necessary demands of the question.
The content, structure and presentation, all are superb.
The points are crisp and informative.
The explanation is very good.
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Should the answer be posted on the same day itself or the next day. Which is more ideal?
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Hi Swetha
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Hi Pankhuri
Welcome to the Daily AWE program.
The intro is very good but try to shorten the length of it. Or you can use two short paragraphs. Large paragraphs should be avoided.
The overall content in the main body is very good.
The explanation is crisp and points are informative.
Underline important points in your answers.
The structure is also decent.
Well done
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Hi Swetha
Welcome to the Daily AWE program.
KIndly upload answers in portrait mode. Pictures with different orientations create issues for us to read.
Better intro is needed.
Write couple of points discussing the history of the Mughal paintings and their origins.
The 1st part of the main body is very good.
But the content in the 2nd part is repetitive and lacks depth.
You do not have to discuss the features in this part. Instead, discuss the prevailing socio-political-cultural which were depicted in these paintings. Take a cue from the images and you will remember that most of them depicted royal courts, hunting, wars, royal couples spending time, foreign dignitaries, saints preaching to common people, a celebration of Holi and Diwali, calf and lion sitting beneath emperors, etc. So think of these and you will get the idea that these themes depicted that society was secular and harmonious, royal proceedings had their protocols and women were not in the proceedings, trade with foreign lands existed, calf and lion depicted justice in the society, etc. Base your discussions on these lines.
Underline important points in your statements.
No need to give subheading of conclusion.
The content in the conclusion needs to connect with the main body of the answer. Read the model answer.
Overall, the structure is decent.
The command on the language is very good.
Thank you for the guidance.
Could you please tell me how to upload the answers in pdf format?
I m not able to attach the file in that format.
Hi Swetha
You can keep uploading pictures only. It’s just that please avoid portrait mode. The orientation of the page should be upright.
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Hi Khus
Welcome to the Daily AWE program.
Very good intro.
The content in the main body is very good.
But keep the length of points down.
Also, underline important points.
Good conclusion.
Overall decent attempt.
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Hi Deepanshu
Welcome to the Daily AWE program.
Keep the 1st part of your intro. The 2nd part is not needed.
The features discussion is very good.
Points are in-depth.
But the 2nd part of the main body needs more content.
You can discuss the presence of foreign dignitaries in the paintings, saints preaching to common people, calf and lion sitting beneath emperors, etc. These themes depicted that society was secular and harmonious, royal proceedings had their protocols and women were not in the proceedings, trade with foreign lands existed, calf and lion depicted justice in the society, etc. Base your discussions on these lines.
Read the model answer.
Overall, the structure and presentation are decent.
Good language.
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Hi Sanu
Welcome to the Daily AWE program.
Do not worry about this being your 1st practice. We are there with you on the journey of success in the civil services exam.
No need to give the subheadings for intro and conclusion. They are naturally present in your answer. So no need to explain to the examiner that you are writing an intro or conclusion.
Do not write big intros.
Briefly give the history of the Mughal paintings and then move to the main body of the answer.
The main body of the answer is well discussed.
It has all the necessary points needed.
But do not write such a big conclusion. Your intros and conclusions should be of only a couple of statements.
Thank you sir, in future i will write as per your direction.
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Hi MeMax
Welcome to the Daily AWE program.
Very good intro.
The content in the 1st part of the main body is good but the structure is missing.
Points are not coherent and they are placed haphazardly.
One big reason is that the 2nd part lacks proper subheading.
Read the main body to see the missing points in the 2nd point.
The conclusion is missing.
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Hi Amit
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Please upload the answers in portrait mode. Reading the answers on a laptop in a landscape mode makes the job tough for me! 😛
Good intro but do not give it a bullet point touch. The intro and conclusion should be based on a short paragraph and the rest of the answer should be based under subheadings with bullet points under each of them.
Highlight your subheadings prominently and underline important points in your answers.
The content in the main body of the answer lacks depth and needs more content.
The 15 mark question needs at least 6 7 points in your subheadings.
Read the model answer for those missing points.
The conclusion is good.
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Hi Divya
Welcome to the Daily AWE program.
The content in the answer, overall, is decent.
Could have discussed some more dimensions in the 2nd part of the answer.
Read the model answer for those points.
Underline important parts of your answers.
Presentation, otherwise, is decent and the structure is fine.
All in all, good attempt
Sure sir. Thank you.
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Hi Siddhant
Welcome back to the Daily AWE program.
Briefly give the history of the Mughal paintings in the intro and then move to the main body of the answer.
Very good first part of the answer.
The second part is also approached in a lucid manner.
But try to underline your important points.
Very good conclusion.
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Hi Sahithya
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Very good answer.
The coverage is perfect in terms of the depth given to the 2nd part of the answer.
At the same time, the 1st part is also detailed.
But you could have made some flowchart or boxed style presentation for the 1st part to bring that X factor in your answer. Remember, the monotonicity of the points needs to be broken in the answers and for that, diagrams or flowcharts or graphs are very useful.
It is good that you discussed your 2nd part in various subparts.
No need to give subheadings to your conclusions. They are naturally recognizable.
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Hi Akankhya
Welcome back to the Daily AWE program.
Overall, the answer is good.
Some of the points like the “technological advancements” need specific examples. As in, how did they showed those advancements. Also when you say that women were missing from the court paintings, then what does it imply? What were its implications?
These points are called general points. You have to give points that are specific in their explanation.
It will help in the enhancement of the answer.
The structure of the answer is very good, especially the content after the intro.
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Hi Shambhavi
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Just a little bit of explanation in the 1st part of the answer (features of the Mughal Paintings) would have been amazing. Points are very good, but it is just that you need something to back it up with. Hence, single statement explanations in each point would have been suffice.
The rest of the answer is excellent.
The language is very good.
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Very good intro.
The presentation is apt.
The structure is fluid and the flow of the content is decent.
The content in the main body is very good.
The dimensions covered under it are as per the demands of the question.
Good conclusion.
Overall decent attempt.