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- In the introduction briefly define what emotional intelligence is.
- In the body explain that emotional intelligence is the ability to “Recognize, understand and manage our own emotions.”
Explain then that whenever individuals interact, such as employees within a project team or managers during a negotiation, interpersonal conflicts are possible. Relate and reason in what way EI can aid in handling conflicts. Use case study/any day to day
example to substantiate the same. - Conclude that emotional intelligence plays an important role in conflict handling as constructive solutions for conflict may require compromises that are based on the ability to recognize and regulate emotions.
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Hi Taran
Good introduction.
Work on content and presentation.
Write your points under subheadings. For example in this question you can write the role of EI under social responsibility, stress tolerance, negotiation , optimism etc.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude that emotional intelligence plays an important role in conflict handling as constructive solutions for conflict may require compromises that are based on the ability to recognize and regulate emotions.
Work on handwriting and underline keywords.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
Write crisp and concise, what you have written in theories of EI , make it your introduction.
Give proper heading like role of EI.
Work on presentation and make your answer structured.
You have given the heading ‘interpersonal conflicts’ two times, avoid these things.
Also emphasise that how emotional intelligence is a must for better public service delivery as
well as redressal.
Good conclusion.
Use of quotes is appreciable.
Work on handwriting.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Avoid drawing lines between paragraphs.
You have explained the role of EI in a decent manner, you can improve your presentation by using subheadings.
Also explain briefly how EI helps in better administration.
Try to cover different aspects of the topic to get better marks.
Lackluster conclusion,conclude that emotional intelligence plays an important role in conflict handling as constructive solutions for conflict may require compromises that are based on the ability to recognize and regulate emotions.
Work on grammar.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
‘how EI gets unnoticed’ – write in brief not on one compete page as this is not he main demand of the question, question is simply asking the role of EI in conflict handling, emphasise on this aspect.
in this question you can write the role of EI in conflict handling under social responsibility, stress tolerance, negotiation , optimism etc.
Good conclusion.
You have given good examples, keep it up.
Keep writing !
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Hi NJ
EI is not only about your own emotions but he emotions of the people around you also.
You have explained the role of EI under decent subheadings.
Also emphasise that how emotional intelligence is a must for better public service delivery as
well as redressal.
Good conclusion.
Underline keywords.
Overall a decent attempt, keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Chester
Lackluster introduction, be specific, understand emotions of whom ?
You have basically written 3 points , add more content, you can write the role of EI under social responsibility, stress tolerance, negotiation , optimism etc.
Write crisp and concise so that you can add more data in the given word limit.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Teja
Content is good in your introduction but need to rephrase it.
Refrain from monotony, use proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better way.
You have explained the role of EI in a decent manner but also emphasise that how emotional intelligence is a must for better public service delivery as well as redressal.
Good conclusion.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Vishesh
Good introduction.
Work on your handwriting, write neat and legible.
Avoid drawing a line between the paragraphs.
Some good points but need to add more content, you can write the role of EI in conflict handling under social responsibility, stress tolerance, negotiation , optimism etc.
Always end your answer with some concluding remarks, conclude that emotional intelligence plays an important role in conflict handling as constructive solutions for conflict may require compromises that are based on the ability to recognize and regulate emotions.
Follow a proper structure.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Keep writing, you will improve.