Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/dams-and- damages/article33795426.ece - In the intro, mention the recent mishap in Uttarakhand that due to flash floods.
- In the body, discuss the impact of dams-use of explosive while constructing the dam, Chopra Committees report which cited the damage exacerbated by the dams, impact on climate change, ignoring of the threat of earthquake etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to take into account the connection of construction activity in the region and its connection with the disasters.
HI Jaya
Good intro.
You have discussed the role of dams in a decent manner.
Mentioning rivers and committees is appreciable.
Good content.
Demand of the question is met.
Good structure.
Give subheadings and underline keywords.
Overall a good attempt.Keep it up.