Mentors Comments:
1. Briefly mention the issue in news
2. Argue for and against both privacy and security. Discuss what are the issues of privacy that get violated if Aadhaar is linked to social sites, then discuss and debate on what are the advantages of doing the same.
3. Give a stand of your choice. Ensure that you have supported more, the stand you are taking.
4. Conclude by emphasizing on need to find a balanced approach to resolve the issue.
Answer:
The national security versus privacy debate has time and again resurfaced. The latest Aadhaar Facebook case brings up persistent issues in the digital world: the conflict between law enforcement and people’s fundamental rights. The Supreme Court time and again stressed the need to find a balance between the right to online privacy and the right of the State to detect people who use the web to spread panic and commit crimes.
The need of Privacy to be respected-
The Constitution of India does not specifically guarantee a “right to privacy”. However, through various judgments like Justice K.S. Puttaswamy (Retd) vs. Union of India case, held that Right to Privacy is a fundamental right under Article 21.
India is a signatory to the Universal Declaration on Human Rights (Article 12) and the International Convention on Civil and Political Rights (Article 17) – both of which recognize privacy as a fundamental right.
The unfettered access to any kind of data without a legal process in place poses great risk of misuse and abuse.
The unchecked and unaccounted data collection and examination, especially by government entities would lay the foundations of a dreaded police and surveillance state.
It is critical to note that the Supreme Court, through its judgment, has laid down a clear precedent to the need to have necessary safeguards and oversight mechanisms.
The court also emphasised on the opportunity for every citizen to be heard before his/her data is collected. Citizens deserve a right to know why and for what purpose their data is collected, as enshrined in the privacy judgment that guarantees the Right to Privacy to 130 crore Indians.
The privacy judgment did outline the tests of legality, legitimate aim, proportionality and procedural safeguards that are fundamental aspects which require qualification by the state before disclosure of citizen’s data.
The intelligence agencies, although accountable to a different set of laws through regulatory mechanisms, do not come under the purview of an ‘oversight mechanism’, including Parliament or the General Comptroller of India.
The Need of surveillance by state:
Unregulated domain: Social media platforms are self-regulated as government does not regulate content appearing on social network platforms; hence ‘due diligence’ is need of the hour for social media.
Organised crime: Social media has become a tool for facilitating organized crime i.e. to commit and provoke extremism, money laundering, violence and crime.
Neutralising terrorist activities Surveillance would help in countering possible terrorist activities by offering better information on potential terror attacks.
Curb on fake news: Fake news is a new challenge for law enforcement agencies as many lynching incidents reported in 2018 were triggered by fake news being circulated through Whatsapp and other social media sites.
Misuse of privacy clause: Until now, it was not possible to trace the origin of a message given the privacy settings of companies. However, the government has sought “technical innovation” from the company to address the issue. The regulations are justified as they strike a pragmatic balance between the competing values of privacy and security.
Enforces Supreme Court’s advisory: The SC order Tehseen S. Poonawalla case and Prajwala Letter Case, which asked government to frame guidelines or a standard operating procedure (SOP) to deal with the publication and proliferation of unlawful content through social media intermediaries like Google, YouTube, Facebook, and WhatsApp.
Lack of cooperation of the social media companies, the inability to pressurise these companies since they are located overseas and the lack of proper mutual legal assistance treaties are just some of the issues that come up.
Terrorist organisations such as ISIS are believed to have started using digital cryptocurrencies such as Bitcoins as the preferred funding mechanism to covertly expand their operations. Data breaches and identity thefts allow a perpetrator to execute any of the above-mentioned activities, with the onus on victims to prove their innocence.
Privacy concerns weakening the ability of our counter-terrorism and intelligence units to stay a step ahead in the darkening digital world would have grave long-term consequences.
Furthermore, measures taken to curb the efforts of the government to collect and analyse data, the primary raw material of our digital economy—while a handful of private corporations colonise the bulk of the planet’s generated data—would undermine the state’s ability to provide quality citizen services, which in turn could create turbulent
social and economic disruptions.
Way forward-
Robust data privacy laws are needed to allow citizens enjoy the right to privacy. The law should encompass all the aspects- data collection, processing and sharing practices.
Privacy should not be used to undermine government transparency. Data protection law should be framed such that it does not make government opaque and unaccountable
To formulate a robust data protection law, the best ideas and practices from both USA and EU’s GDPR should be adapted.
The creation of independent watchdog institutions akin to the Election Commission, preferably answerable to a parliamentary committee, with ample constitutional authority to oversee and ensure that any public or private organisation working with data complies with stringent data privacy, protection and security regulations, would be ideal steps to ensure that our citizens effectively preserve their privacy in the digital age.
The International Principles on the Application of Human Rights to Communication Surveillance recommends the establishment of “public oversight mechanisms” for state surveillance.
Principles of accountability and transparency lie at the heart of such oversight mechanisms that are critical to protect privacy of citizens.
National security is critical and paramount to India’s prosperity. However, it must be channelled through a judicial and parliamentary process, while at the same time making the agencies accountable, which lies at the core of a functioning democracy. We cannot compromise on our sovereignty and security at any cost and it doesn’t have to conflict with our right to privacy.
Recently, one faction who wants linkage of aadhaar to the social media profiles went to the high courts(4 PILs in 3 different HCs) to do so. Facebook has requested SC to take decision on it as it is the matter of whole nation and different decision by different HCs can create contradictory.
Influx of fake news at the time because of social media that often leads to mob lynching and riots targeting one particular caste, community or religion is a great conern for the State’s harmony and also increasing cyber crime that is a big threat to nation’s securtiy,. Linking aadhaar can mitigate dissemination of fake news and discourage cyber crime and could also help in allocating the accused because every aadhaar has unique number and this would delete fake accounts and help in finding, but it could also expose person’s perosnal details to various unlawful organizations and also threaten the right to privacy of a person which is a fundamental right.
Eyes over the happenings in the social media is very necessary for nation’s wellness and linking aadhaar to social media profile could be a good step towards this. But people’s privacy is important too and if the government takes the step of linking aadhaar then it must ensure safety measures are there to maintain person’s privacy.
Hi Virag
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The answer lacks content and dimensions.
Lengthy intro.
Briefly mention the issue in news
Then argue for and against both privacy and security. Discuss what are the issues of privacy that get violated if Aadhaar is linked to social sites, then discuss and debate on what are the advantages of doing the same.
Give a stand of your choice. Ensure that you have supported more, the stand you are taking.
Conclude by emphasizing on need to find a balanced approach to resolve the issue.
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@Parth Verma sir.
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Avoid lengthy statements because they lose meaning after a time.
The intro makes no sense in terms of sentence. Work on your writing skills.
The direction of the answer is perfect but points overall are general and lack edge
Part of it is because of language and rest is because of the lack of the dimensions.
Read the model answer.
Good way forward.
Work on your writing skills Neha
Recently PIL were being filed in different HC., inline with linking of social media account of users with Adhara.
Reason in support of linking :
1- It will be easy for the state to trace down the fake and radical news during the time of violence or curfew.
2-With growing ISIS networking influence through social media platform it will be easy for state to keep a check on it. example- last year youth from Kerala were found in link with ISIS through social media.
3- surveillance will be more easy. As it will be centalised.
4-It will make social media companies to localize the data storage.
5-I.T. has played a major role influencing the politics around the world ( U.S. presidential elections, U.K. BREXIT referendum). hence it will be easy for state to keep a check on it especially during election time.
But on the contrary it has got certain repercussions :
1- It in infringes the right to privacy which is a fundamental right under article 21.
2-It may lead to create a authoritarian and surveillance state which is against the democracy.
3-As per the SC judgement in aadhar act- aadhar can only be used for providing the benefit and welfare schemes to people.
4-Data localisation is an issue due to lack of infrastructure and R&D.
last year, in draft presented by MeiTY there was provision of identifing the originator of the violence by the intermediaries. On the contrary it will be a ethical issue for social media companies as the follow END-TO-END encryption for privacy and keeping a backdoor for surveillance.
Hence in order to linking of aadhar with social media has to pass the test of proportionality which was upheld in puttuswamy case.
HI Ankish
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Points are good in the 1st part.
In K.S. Puttasawy case, 2018, the majority held that the linking of aadhar with private firms is unconstitutional. In this context, linking of aadhar with social media yields contempt of court.
In the digital world, right to privacy is inevitable. It is possible to manipulate the people through psychographic analysis of data and influence them in election process, as in the case of cambridge analytica. It is against the principle of democracy.
On the other hand, it is imperactive to be a strong nation in the multipolar world. A strong nation must enjoys unity beyond their diversity. The separatist and radical ideas are impedent to the unity of nation. It is, therefore, necessary to curb the separatist ideas in its naive stage.
As a liberal nation, we ensure basic human right and also a constitutional right – right to privacy. As a democratic nation, the coercive act of finding and punishing the originator who spread radical ideas in the social media by linking aadhar is not advisible. Even it further cause radicalisation and become a threat to democracy.
Hence, the value education should be given to the minds of separatist and radicals and proactively bring the behaviour change among them.
Hi Saran
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The content lacks depth in the answer.
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Weak conclusion.
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Good way forwards.
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Hi Manikandan
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Hi Megha
No need to discuss the background of the issue separately. They are already discussed briefly in the intro.
It was in Puttuswamy case that SC declared Right To Privacy as as Fundamental Right. When quoting judgments, then make sure they are accurate.
The main body is good in terms of dimensions covered.
But start writing on plain sheet of A4. That will give you better sense of presentation, spacing, structuring.
Good way forwards.
Give some space between changing subheadings.
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The main body of the answer is fine.
But better and concrete way forwards are needed.
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Good points in the 1st part.
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The points in the 1st part are good.
But 2nd part needs better content. Right now its general in its analysis.
Discuss the answer under the preview of privacy vs security. Which is more important according to you?
Points like data localisation or commercial exploration are not valid in this question. Its about privacy and security; not data localisation.
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Good points in the main body.
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Way forwards are excellent and exhaustive.
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The main body needs more content and dimensions.
Way forwards are very good and balanced.
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In the intro, mention the case pending in the SC. Try to link the issue with the intro.
Very large intro and the main body comes quite late in the answer.
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The discussion in the main body is vague and rather than answering the question, it brings in more question. Avoid such rhetorical presentation and content.
Good conclusion and way forward.
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