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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ padmanabhaswamy-case-kerala- pb-mehta-6515406/ - https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/a-template-to- manage-temples/ article32142228.ece
- In the intro, mention the concept of secularism in the context of the Constitution.
- In the body, either agree or disagree with the view by giving reasons for your argument. In the implications of the recent judgement, mention the problems created by the private management of the temples, questions over the 26th Amendment, issue of exclusion etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to find the balance between the two conflicting temple management issues.
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Hi Taran
Rephrase your introduction.
There is no need to write the government role, instead explain the issue of administration of temples in temples .
Do not directly write the judgement, briefly explain the case.
Also mention the problems created by the private management of the temples, questions over the 26th Amendment, issue of exclusion etc.
Work on content , read comprehensively to enrich it.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using short forms and work on sentence formation.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
You have explained the issue of management of temples in a good manner.
As the question mentions the Padmanabhaswamy case, so write about it in detail, the background, judgement and its implications.
Give proper headings and subheadings.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Work on handwriting.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Issue of temple’s administration is well explained.
You have give heading- Implications of recent judgement, first tell about the judgement, its background and all, then write the implications.
Follow a proper structure.
Way forward is well explained.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude by mentioning the need to find the balance between the two conflicting temple management issues.
Work on handwriting, avoid scribbling.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Uttam
Lackluster introduction, explain the concept of secularism in the context of the Constitution.
Your heading ‘Not fits well’ does not make any sense, give proper headings, simply write issues in temple’s administration.
You have deviated from the demand of the question, in the implications of the recent judgement, mention the problems created by the private management of the temples, questions over the 26th Amendment, issue of exclusion etc.
Good conclusion but rephrase it.
Avoid grammatical errors and work on sentence formation to fetch better marks.
Keep writing, you will improve.3
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Hi Sneha
In the introduction, also mention the concept of secularism in the context of the Constitution.
You have explained the issue of administration of temples in temples in a good manner.
In the Padmanabhaswamy case,write some background also, you can write – As per the Instrument of Accession signed between the princely states and the Government of India, the administration of the Padmanabhaswamy Temple was vested in trust in the Ruler of Travancore, since 1949.
Implications and the way forward are well explained .
Content is decent.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by mentioning the need to find the balance between the two conflicting temple management issues.
Keep writing !
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Hi Sakshi
Scan your answer properly.
Good introduction but need to summarise it.
You have explained the issue of temple administration in a good manner.
Write in simple language, avoid using bookish language.
In the Padmanabhaswamy case,write some background also, you can write – As per the Instrument of Accession signed between the princely states and the Government of India, the administration of the Padmanabhaswamy Temple was vested in trust in the Ruler of Travancore, since 1949.
Write short conclusion or fragment your content in two parts, way forward and conclusion.
Work on presentation, leave proper space between the lines and underline keywords.
Avoid using short forms.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
Work on space management, summarise your content.
You have explained the issue of administration of temples in a decent manner.
In the Padmanabhaswamy case,write some background also, you can write – As per the Instrument of Accession signed between the princely states and the Government of India, the administration of the Padmanabhaswamy Temple was vested in trust in the Ruler of Travancore, since 1949.
Implications and the way forward are well explained .
Lackluster conclusion, conclude by mentioning the need to find the balance between the two conflicting temple management issues.
Rest of the content is good and well placed.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Unnati
Good introduction but write in one paragraph only.
You have explained the issue of administration of temples in a decent manner.
In the Padmanabhaswamy case,write some background also, you can write – As per the Instrument of Accession signed between the princely states and the Government of India, the administration of the Padmanabhaswamy Temple was vested in trust in the Ruler of Travancore, since 1949.
Implications and the way forward are well explained .
Way forward is well explained.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Keep writing, you will succeed.