Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction present a brief introduction about status of women.
- In the body explain in what way economic independence becomes an enabling element for development. Comment upon the areas of success regarding women empowerment. Give examples of recent government initiatives and policies that aimed to empower women
economically and make them independent. Discuss the challenges involved. - Conclude with way forward.
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Hi Kanchi
Good introdcution.
You have discussed the significance and challenges in a decent manner.
In the measures, also write about the behavioural changes such as breaking the social barriers by gender sensitization and education at families, schools and workplaces. Incentivising companies to employ women and promoting safe work spaces are necessary.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep working hard.
Plz review on answer
Hi Jyoti
In the introduction do not write the challenges .
Content is there but need to fragement it properly.
Use proper subheadings and improve presentation.
Write on blank white sheet.
Adhere to word limit.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.