Mentors Comments:
- The question is in the context of contributions made by the contemporary women for the women movements held in demand for equal rights, equity, economic and social empowerment, etc. Thus the question becomes important from the point of view of GS paper I.
- The question envisages us to discuss the phenomena of contemporary women-led movements and the factors responsible for it. One has to track the development of a number of feminist activities in various parts of the country justifying the contribution of contemporary women crusade in women empowerment.
- Briefly discuss the significance of women empowerment in the intro.
- In the main body, first, explain what exactly constitutes women’s movement?
- Discuss in short how the role of women in Indian society has evolved over the ages.
- Discuss the rise of the feminist movement in India in the 1970s and how women have been empowered through legislation and societal changes.
- Elaborate on different streams of feminist orientations in India – one on aspects of polity, specific movements for social change in order to effect the revolutionary transformation of society, Radical Feminists, development of feminists, etc.
- Quote case studies from India.
- Conclude with few of their achievements made in this direction and suggest upon their crucial role.
Answer:
Women’s movement can be described as a prolonged and sustained movement that has a clear vision, effective leadership, a set of institutionalized roles and an organization for the upliftment of women’s condition in society. The contemporary women’s movement in India (1975–present) has played an important role in bringing gender issues to the forefront of development planning and defining feminist politics.
Many women’s organizations like the National Federation of Indian Women (1954) the Samajwadi Mahila Sabha (1559) were formed to work for championing the cause of Indian women. By 1970 the political atmosphere began to change in India. Many leading political parties realized the importance of including women in their struggle for realizing their objectives. It was partly on compassion and partly for securing their ends that they included women as a vanguard force.
The well-known women’s organizations that were formed during this time are the Stree Mukhti Sangkatana, the Stree Sangharsh and Mahila Dakshata in Delhi. Vimochana in Chennai, Baijja in Maharashtra, Pennurumai in Chennai. The Feminist Network in English and Manushi in Hindi were some of the first women’s newsletters and magazines to appear.
The major demands of the contemporary women movements:
- issues such as child marriage, sex-selective abortions and dowry-related violence.
- Equality not merely for justice but for development
- The focus should be on economic empowerment of women
- Childbearing should be shared as a social responsibility
- Recognition of household work as national productivity
- Marriage and motherhood should not be a disability
- Emancipation of women should be linked to social emancipation
- Special temporary measures for de facto equality.
The famous Chipko movement which was basically an ecology movement created not only a11 awareness among the middle class and rural women but also enunciated a new theory that women should be given the right for self- determination. The Chipko movement also picturized women as being an exploited class along with nature, and any violence against nature began to be identified with violence against women.
There were three different streams of feminist orientations:
- The Liberal Stream focuses on demanding reforms in those aspects of the polity which specifically affect women.
- The Leftist Stream situates oppression of women within a holistic analysis of the general structure of oppression and calls for a coming together of specific movements for social change in order to effect the revolutionary transformation of society.
- The Radical Feminists concentrate on defining the development of feminity and masculinity in society as fundamental polarities and experimented with reclaiming traditional sources of women’s strength, creativity, and so on.
The New Delhi gang rape in 2012 has become a landmark in the fight for women’s rights and feminism in India, leading to legislative changes and moving gender to the center stage of political debates.
Though the Indian women’s movement has achieved much, activists and scholars say that there is still a long way to go. Meanwhile, the women’s movement is grappling with ever-new problems as vast economic and social changes sweep the country while old mindsets steeped in patriarchy still prevail.
In the early 21st century, millennial Indian women launched a radically new kind of feminist politics that had not been seen before. Inspired by a vocabulary of rights and modes of protest used by the youth across the world, such as Occupy Wall Street and the Arab Spring, they initiated a series of social media campaigns against the culture of sexual violence.
The earliest campaigns – the 2003 Blank Noise Project against eve-teasing, the 2009 Pink Chaddi (underwear) movement against moral policing and the 2011 SlutWalk protest against victim-blaming – were limited in their scope but set the tone for this new mode of protest. Campaigns such 2011 Why Loiter project on women’s right to public spaces, the 2015 Pinjra Tod (Break the Cage) movement against sexist curfew rules in student halls and the 2017 Bekhauf Azadi (Freedom without Fear) March resonated with a much larger number of women, turning this social media-led phenomenon into a true feminist movement.
The challenges that the feminist movement now faces stem from the vast diversities within India. Feminism within India is divided along the class, caste, sexuality, and disability, and as parts of India develop at a faster rate, increased social and economic inequality is giving rise to new problems like sexual harassment at the workplace and in public transport.
As it deals with the new problems, Indian feminism is still battling with many of the old problems. The recent #MeToo campaign shows the changing face of women’s movements in India.
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The overall discussion is fine.
But your structure misses a couple of dimensions, which you should include in your answer. That is, discuss in short how the role of women in Indian society has evolved over the ages.
Secondly, elaborate on different streams of feminist orientations in India – one on aspects of polity, specific movements for social change in order to effect the revolutionary transformation of society, Radical Feminists, development of feminists etc.
This will make the answer wholesome and it will complement the overall content of yours.
The discussion in the answer is good.
You have touched good case studies.
The issues with the movement is well discussed.
The content has the necessary depth and explanation.
Read the model answers for the missing talking points that I suggested.
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The answer started really well but it veered off the trajectory in the second part of the answer.
The intro and the starting talking points regarding women movements are very good.
But then you failed to discuss the main demands of the question after that.
You discussed that India has one of the highest number of female politicians in the world. That is factually incorrect. In the last 56 years, India’s Lok Sabha has not been able to double its tally of elected women representatives. In 1962, Lok Sabha had 6 per cent women in Parliament. In 2014, the number was just 11 per cent and in 2019 it is 14%. India stood 149th in a 2019 list of 193 countries ranked by the percentage of elected women representatives in their national parliaments, trailing Pakistan, Bangladesh and Afghanistan and dropping three places since 2018.
So, avoid such misleading statements in the answers.
Secondly, while you discussed the increasing role of women in the sphere of politics, law & order, military, culture, but that was not the demand of the question.
Simple demand was that once you have discussed the introduction of women movement in India, you have to discuss their demands and various phases of these movements.
Then discuss recent incidents as a case study like movement post brutal rape and murder in Delhi (2012), Me Too movement, Pinjda Tod, etc
Then in the 2nd part, you were supposed to discuss the issues and challenges with these movements and what should be the way forward.
Read the model answer to see the relevant structure of the answer.
Your presentation style is good with a clear handwriting.
But do use subheading to denote the direction of the discussion in each paragraph or bullet points
Always read the mentors comment before attempting the question in order to understand the demand and direction of the answer.
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In the 1st part, briefly mention what do you mean by a women movement.
Then discuss what are their demands.
Then discuss their various phases.
Then discuss the challenges and issues with Indian women movements.
End with the way forward.
These are the subheadings or the talking points that you missed in your answer.
You only gave case studies in the main body (which were good, no doubt) and ended the answer.
Therefore the content is not according to the demand of the question, the structure is missing and the overall direction of the answer is wayward.
Always read the mentors comments carefully to understand the demand of the question and its directions.
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good attempt 🙂
advice u can underline imp things.
When was there a women movement regarding their right to vote in the independent India? It was never withheld for the women in Independent India. The US took 144 years to give equal voting rights to women. Suffragettes in the UK took nearly a century to win the vote. Women won the vote in some cantons of Switzerland as recently as 1974. But Indian women got the right to vote the year their country was born.
Hence avoid such factual mistakes in your answer.
After intro, briefly discuss what do you mean by a women movement.
Good use of flowchart to discuss the demands of the women movement in India.
While your discussion regarding the impact of the women movement in India is good, but quote some examples too to make it more effective.
Good 2nd part of the answer.
But between the 1st and 2nd part, discuss the various phase of women movement in the independent India.
Read the model answers for the missing talking points.
The overall content and its direction are decent.
The structure is fine.
Presentation can be improved by underlining the important points in your answer and keeping your bullet points aligned in a certain manner.
@Parth Verma Sir,
I have answered the question from world perspective as it was not asked in indian context specifically. So the voting rights I have mentioned were from world level point of view. Please correct me if my understanding is wrong.