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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ migrant-workers-coronavirus- job-opportunities-6705782/ - In the intro, mention the issue of the informal sector in India and its connection with the labour laws.
- In the body discuss how the labour laws and the various restrictions influence the expansion of the firms in India and its implications for the economy as a whole. Next mention how the reforms introduced in the labour laws could help in dealing with such hurdles while ensuring the employment security of the workers.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to generate employment that is safer and fairer and how it could be achieved by the reform put in place.
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Hi KK
Good introduction.
You have write your content under one heading- benefits, avoid it, try to cover different dimensions to fetch better marks.
Give various headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better structured way.
Discuss how the labour laws and the various restrictions influence the expansion of the firms in India and its implications for the economy as a whole.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude by mentioning the need to generate employment that is safer and fairer and how it could be achieved by the reform put in place.
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