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- In the introduction briefly write about Jyotiba phule.
- In the body discuss his ideas and ideologies in detail while substantiating his works in the same direction. Give your opinion on his radical views.
- Conclude with the significance.
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Hi KG
Good intro.
In the contributions, you can also write that along with his wife, Savitribai Phule, he is regarded as pioneers of women’s education in India. The couples were the first native Indians to open the first indigenously-run school for girls in India in August 1848 at Pune in Maharashtra.
Rest of the answer is well written.
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Hi Sandeep
Good intro.
Contributions are discussed in a decent manner.’
In the radical views,write that Jyotiba Phule’s radical humanism made him distinct from other nationalist leaders and was emulated by both E V Ramaswamy and Bhimrao Ambedkar.
Good conclusion.
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Hi Sanchit
Good intro.
Significance and contributions are discussed in a decent manner.
Also mention his famous works:
1. Tritiya Ratna (1855), Gulamgiri (1873), Shetkarayacha Aasud, or Cultivator’s Whipcord
(1881)
Good structure.
Try to give subheadings .
Good conclusion.
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Hi Supriya
Try to write on blank white sheet.
After the introduction, give a proper heading.
Contributions are discussed in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
In the radical views, write that his remarkable legacy could be attested by the fact that a set of social movements in Maharashtra involving women, farmers, Dalits, and environmentalists consider Phule as their forerunner.
Good conclusion.
Try to write all the four answers.
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