Mentor’s comment-

• In the introduction you can start by appreciating facts related to India’s vulnerability towards earthquakes.
• In the body discuss the geographical angle of the earthquakes in India, its vulnerability and risks. Explain the past earthquake experiences. Discuss what should be the way forward. Take hints from the article talk about mandating a new earthquake proof
  architecture regime in earthquake prone areas, need to decongest the cities, regulate high-rise constructions, needs to be seismic planning for all major infrastructure etc.
• Conclude with way forward.