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- In the introduction briefly define EI.
- In the body explain relevance of emotional intelligence in time of frequent policy changes and stress, with suitable examples.
Elaborate upon the key components of EI. Explain that reforms come with various policy changes and sometimes such policy changes are very frequent creating stress for public servants. - Conclude with need of emotional intelligence in every walk of life and assert its significance with special focus on the aspects of public services.
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Hi Jyotsana
Answer is well started.
In the body , write under subheadings .
For example, you can give subheadings that emotional intelligence is relevant in –
Predicting performance
Negotiation
Peer relationships etc.
Try to follow a proper structure and diversify your answer.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Samiksha
Good introduction but try to summarise it.
Read the question again, question is asking the relevance of emotional intelligence, so write the relevance under subheadings like Predicting performance, negotiation, peer relationships, stress tolerance etc.
Brainstorm before writing.
Conclusion is good.
Refrain from long paragraphs.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Arun
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Good introduction.
You have explained the relevance of EI in a decent manner.
You can add more points like EI can help in negotiation, optimism, impulse control etc.
Try to diversify your answer.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep writing !
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