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- In the introduction briefly define the poverty conditions in the country, explain why the issues still persist despite
consistent efforts of the governments in the past. - In the body discuss first the concerns involved in addressing poverty through policies and programme.
Explain then the various types of efforts made by the government to address poverty – growth oriented approach, income based approach, developmental strategies etc.
Suggest what should be done, quote examples of the ongoing policies, explain how they are different from their previous versions etc. - Conclude on a positive note that the government is changing its approach to tackle poverty based on
the response of it to previous programme.
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Hi Dakshina
Rephrase your introduction.
Good use of flow chart.
Use proper headings and subheadings for better presentation.
Mention various poverty alleviation programs in India since Independence starting from
Integrated Rural Development Program(IRDP).
Also mention the issues surrounding poverty alleviation policies and programme.
Good conclusion.
Enrich and diversify your content.
Improve your handwriting.
Keep writing!
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Hi
Good introduction
there are some good points but also explain why it is necessary to
identify poverty stricken areas and provide infrastructure to them.
You have mentioned the policies and programme in a decent manner but you can mention the policies since Independence starting from Integrated Rural Development Program(IRDP).
Well structured answer.
Content is diversified.
Good attempt,keep writing !
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Hi Sneha
This is a 10 marker question so write in accordance.
adhere to word limit.
Your content is really good but you need to summarise it.
You have covered various aspects but also mention various poverty alleviation programs in India since Independence starting from Integrated Rural Development Program(IRDP).
Overall a decent attempt.
Write crisp as space will be limited in mains answer sheet.
Good attempt,keep it up.
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Hi Chester
Scan properly and send your answer sheet again.
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Hi Deepika
In introduction, explain briefly the condition of poverty in India.
You have explained the issues in a good manner but add more dimensions like there is a lack of awareness about the policies,how financial illiteracy leads to poverty etc.
Use of flow chart is appreciable.
Also mention various poverty alleviation programs in India since Independence.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing !
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Hi Vishesh
Rephrase your introduction.
Learn the difference between its and it’s,improve basic grammar
Avoid using short forms in your answers.
Read mentor’s comment before writing the answer.
Also discuss the concerns involved in addressing poverty through policies and programme.
Brainstorm before writing.
Mention why it is necessary to identify poverty stricken areas .
Lackluster conclusion.
Work hard,you will succeed.
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Hi Venkatesh
Good introduction
Good use of flow chart.
Before writing measures,write what are the issues faced by government in implementing the poverty policies and programme.
Adhere to the proper structure of the question.
You have discussed the measures in a decent manner.
work on your presentation,improve handwriting.
Avoid scribbling.
You have the potential,keep writing !
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Hi Vikrant
Lackluster introduction , you can quote some relevant data.
For better presentation,use headings and subheadings.
Need to work upon content,mention various poverty alleviation programs in India since Independence,then what are the issues coming in the way of implementation ,then write some of your own suggestions.
Plan a structure before writing,it will help you.
Need to improve basic grammar and spellings.
Work hard,you will improve.
Sir please review mine @. ParthVerma