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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/who- wants-federalism-7098577/ - In the intro, mention how Indian federalism is different from the federalism in a strict sense such as in the U.S.
- In the body, mention the factors which helped in sustaining the federalism in India like linguistic and cultural diversity, fragmentation of power through coalition governments, institutional cultures such as the Supreme Court or Finance Commission and asymmetrical federalism which allows different treatment to some states to some extent.
- Conclude by stating that flexible federalism played important role in the development of the country.
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@Parth Sir, Please review
Hi Neeraj
Good introduction.
You have explained ‘fexibility in federalism’ in a decent manner.
Work on space management so that you can add some concluding remarks in the given word and space limit.
Conclude by stating that flexible federalism played important role in the development of the country.
Content wise good attempt.
Try to write all the four answers on a regular basis.
Keep working hard.
Please review
Hi Shivali
Introduction should be of one small paragraph, summarise your introduction.
The body of the answer has decent content.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by stating that flexible federalism played important role in the development of the country.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
Underline keywords and scan your sheet properly.
Try to write all the four answers on a regular basis.
Work hard, you will succeed.
Please review sir
Hi Vedanta
First thing, your answer looks monotonous, refrain from it.
Underline keywords and use headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Content wise good attempt.
Avoid using short forms like govt.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.
Please review
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