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- https://indianexpress.com/article/opinion/columns/education-policy-india-schooling-6216711/
- In the intro, briefly describe what constitutes preschool education.
- In the main body describe the importance of preschool education for the overall education system, also explain how it is not getting the required attention. Stress the consequences of its neglect for the education system.
- In conclusion, describe the need for focus on this area of education along with the other areas.
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@Parth Verma not checked
Skills and employment arguments in a question regarding Pre-School question? Avoid these general statements.
Subsidies and government funds?
Very poor answer in terms of the content.
Your points are quite vague and repetitive in both parts.
Discuss the findings or stats of the ASER report in your 1st part.
Only then discuss the importance of the preschool education.
What are the reasons for these poor findings in the report?
Good way forward.
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Answer is good in terms of content and presentation.
Presentation can be improved.
Give some space when changing the subheadings.
Also underline key points in the answer
Points are good.
All in all decent attempt.
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A very good 1st part of the answer.
The main body of the answer is fine.
The content there is deep and well explained.
Though the length of your statements can be reduced.
The way forward needs to be more and written separately rather than being passed off as a conclusion.
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Always write a conclusion.
They are the soft cushion to your answer’s overall discussion.
Also, make a point of underlining key points in your answers
Do highlight your subheadings prominently.
You have improved a lot with your answers and this shows here.
You were able to grasp the demand of the question in an efficient manner.
Points are well framed and well structured.
Very good 2nd part of the answer.
Keep writing.