Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/do-we-need-a- fiscal-council/ article32046204.ece - In the intro, briefly mention about the mandate of the council.
- In the body, you can either agree or disagree with the view. As in the above-cited article, you can disagree with the view by mention the issues such as-duplicity of role with FRBM, issue of lack of demand from accountability, issue of interference with the role of Finance Ministry, issue of overlapping function with CAG as a watchdog etc.
- Conclude by suggesting the provision of appointment of an ad-hoc committee by CAG before the budget with the mandate of scrutinising the budget.
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Hi Dakshina
Lackluster introduction, first explain what do you mean by fiscal council then briefly mention about the mandate of the council.
In the issues part, need to add points.
You can write about the lack of political will leading to chronic fiscal irresponsibility.
Explain briefly why India needs a fiscal council. You can write that it works as a mechanism to ensure that the basic spirit of the devolution process .
Then suggest some way forward.
Mention N.K. Singh committee and D.K. Srivastava committee.
Content should be diversified and condensed for better marks.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Taran
Lackluster introduction,first explain what do you mean by fiscal council then briefly mention about the mandate of the council.
You have explained the need of fiscal council in a good manner.
Avoid using absolute terms like fiscal council will not be successful in India, instead write the issues and challenges.
In your suggestion part, merge your 1 and 2 point, write crisp and concise.
Need to add more solid points in the way forward .
Conclusion is missing, read mentor’s comment.
Work on handwriting.
Avoid using short forms like acc, govt etc.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi
Good introduction.
You have explained the merits and demerits in a good manner but the question is not demanding that.
Read the question again,it is asking your viewpoint about the formation of fiscal council and will it be helpful in portraying the virtue of the fiscal discipline of the government.
Write in accordance , brainstorm before writing.
Mention the challenges then suggest some way forward.
Read mentor’s comment before writing, it will help you in writing good answers.
Avoid using short forms like govt,fol, & etc.
Do not get demotivated by the marks, keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Thumbs up for the structure of the answer.
The question is asking about your viewpoint, in your answer it is not clear that whether you are in favor or not, understand the demand of the question.
Content is good for static question but not for this.
Good conclusion.
Avoid scribbling while writing.
Understand the task word of the question then write.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
Content is decent and in accordance with the demand of the question.
You have covered the issues in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
The answer is well structured.
Good conclusion.
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Hi Unnati
Lackluster introduction,first explain what do you mean by fiscal council then briefly mention about the mandate of the council.
You have explained the need of fiscal council in a good manner.
Way forward is good but also mention N.K. Singh committee and D.K. Srivastava committee.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
A decent attempt.
Work on handwriting, make it legible to get better marks.
Keep working hard !