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- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/rbi-goes-for- massive-governance-reforms-in- commercial-banks-key- recommendations/2006866/ - In the intro, mention the recent episodes of governance failures like Yes Bank.
- In the body, mention the current norms for banks under Companies Act 2013 and disclosure requirements under SEBI norms etc. In suggestion improvement in the governance structure through various conditions can be suggested.
- In conclusion, highlight the importance of a reliable,stable and resilient banking system for the country.
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Hi Taran
Need to rephrase your introduction.
Use heading and subheadings for better presentation.
Like in this question,you can give headings like importance of banking system, current norms of banking system ,suggestions and conclusion.
Also mention how to align the current regulatory framework on bank governance with global best practices, including the guidelines issued by the Basel Committee on Banking Supervision and the Financial Stability Board.
Work on content.
Underline keywords to get better marks.
Keep writing!
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Hi Dakshina
Introduction could be better.
Good use of flow chart !
Mention what governance risks associated with recent lapses of banks.
Add dimensions to your answer.
Write points in your suggestions like the majority of a commercial bank’s board must comprise of independent directors.
You can go through the newspaper article link , it will help you to improve your content.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing!
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Hi
Need to rephrase your introduction, grammatical errors are there.
Use of flow chart is appreciable.
Content is good and well placed.
Structure of answer is good.
Try to manage the space in a better way.
You your answer is according to the demand of the question,keep it up !
A decent attempt.
Keep writing.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Mention briefly the functions performed by banking system,you can use a flow chart for that.
Mention about Basel norms, various committees regarding banking governance etc.
You can also mention briefly why good banking governance is important for India.
Try to cover more aspects.
Work on content.
Suggestions are good.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing.
Plz review it
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Hi Parakh
Introduction is not according to the demand of the question.
Add more functions of the bank in the same flow chart.
Cover more verticals, add Basel norms,PCA ,bank’s ombudsman etc.
Brainstorm before writing.
Briefly explain why good banking governance is important for India.
Way forward is good,keep it up !
Work on basic grammar and improve handwriting to get good marks.
You have the potential to write good answers,keep writing,you will succeed.