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- https://www.livemint.com/
opinion/online-views/opinion- how-pfms-is-ensuring- transformation-through- digital-inclusion- 11611914036703.html - In the intro, briefly introduce PFMS.
- In the body, discuss the role played by PFMS in increasing accountability and transparency. Also mention the mandate of PFMS which includes tracking of fund flow in its role as financial management platform, information on fund utilisation etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for improvement in a data management capacity, agility in operation and constant upgradation.
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Hi Bhupender
Good intro.
After the introduction try to give a heading.
Mention that PFMS provides various stakeholders with a real time, reliable and meaningful management information system and an effective decision support system, as part of the Digital India initiative of GoI.
Avoid using short forms like govt.
Use subheadings and underline keywords.
Keep writing, you will succeed.