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- In the intro, explain the dominant role played by consumption in India’s growth.
- In the first part explain how consumption and investment dominate India’s growth story by contributing more than 2/3 in its growth its role as the driver of India’s economy. In the next part, state the importance of spending on infrastructure from the Keynesian perspective.
- Conclude by stressing the importance of Keynesian theory for steering the economy out of recession.
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Hi Taran
Lackluster introduction, first write about the gloomy prospects of Indian economy in this pandemic times.
Use of flow chart in appreciable but try to cover the issues in a more comprehensive way.
Then write the importance of expenditure on spending on infrastructure.
Read mentor’s comment before writing the answer,it will help you in writing a structured answer.
Work on content and the presentation.
Underline keywords.
Improve spellings and basic grammar to get better marks.
Do not get demotivated by the marks, keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Lackluster introduction, first write about the gloomy prospects of Indian economy in this pandemic times then write about the role of investment and consumption.
Role of investment and consumption is well explained.
In the Importance of spending on infrastructure, along with other points,write about the National Infrastructure Pipeline and Special Infrastructure Bond and how these could help businesses and bankers to overcome risk aversion.
Update your answer with current topics to get better marks.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting,avoid scribbling.
Keep writing!
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Hi Dakshina
Thumbs up for introduction.
You have used very minute statistical data in your answer, appreciable but try to avoid that because there are chances you can go wrong with these data.
Role of consumption and investment are well explained.
You have written the answer as it is a question of economics optional, write in accordance of GS.
Instead of making that graph, simply write few points about the importance of infrastructure investment, write about the National Infrastructure Pipeline and Special Infrastructure Bond and how these could help businesses and bankers to overcome risk aversion.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Keep writing.
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Hi NJ
Lackluster introduction, first write about the gloomy prospects of Indian economy in this pandemic times .
Role of consumption and investment are well explained.
Role of infrastructure investment needs more point,you can write briefly that historically, countries have used infrastructure to provide counter-cyclical support to the economy.
Write about the Special Infrastructure Bond .
Try to cover different dimensions while writing to get better marks.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing !
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Use of diagram is appreciable.
Avoid using short forms like infra,govt etc.
Try to relate the first and second part of the question .You can write like industry would invest more depending on demand conditions and it is here that the infrastructure push of the government can make a difference.
You can explain that infrastructure has strong links to growth and with both supply and demand-side features that help generate employment and long-term assets.
Brainstorm before writing.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart is good but write some solid points about the role of investment and consumption in an economy.
In the role of infrastructure, there is lack of content
Explain how infrastructure has strong links to growth and with both supply and demand-side features that help generate employment and long-term assets.
Avoid these type of points like one rupee will make 10 rupee.
Work on writing language and content.
Add some data, current topics like National infrastructure Pipeline and Special investment bond etc.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Teja
Lackluster introduction,first write about the gloomy prospects of Indian economy in this pandemic times then highlight the role of investment and consumption.
All the points you have written in the role of investment and consumption part, can be easily summarised in a simple flow chart, add some more points.
Role of infrastructure investment is well explained .
Good conclusion.
Work on basic grammar.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing.
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Hi Aastha
You have written quite general introduction, write according to the situation of economy in this pandemic time.
Rest of the content is good and diverse.
Structure of the answer is up to the mark.
Lackluster conclusion,conclude by stressing the importance of Keynesian theory for steering the economy out of recession.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing,you will succeed.