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- Briefly set the context of the question by referring to the timeline of events highlighting the coming of Sir Syed Ahmed Khan.
- In the body start by elaborating on the works and contributions of him. List down his overall contributions.
- Conclude with appreciation of the contributions made by him.
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Hi Surya
Good intro.
Thumbs up for the content.
Work on the presentation, use headings and subheadings .
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Deepika
Good intro.
You can also mention that Sir Syed is believed to be the first Indian Muslim who understood the need for a fresh orientation of Islam. He also gave rational interpretations of Islamic scriptures.
Rest of the answer is well written.
Good structure.
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Hi Vaidehi
Try to summarise your introduction, it should be concise.
Content wise good attempt.
Use proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Refrain from monotony.
You could have avoid the last two lines.