Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/pm-fasal-bima- yojana-2-0-centre-revamps- flagship-scheme-to-ensure- quick-payment-of-claims-to- farmers/2053505/ - In the intro, mention the purpose importance of insurance to the farmers.
- In the body, mention the important role played by PMFBY by citing the figures of its disbursement and how it provided the sort of income security to the farmers. In the next part mention some issues like the late payment by some states, de-duplication and reinsurance etc to for making changes in the scheme.
- Conclude by mentioning the important role insurance plays in the farmers’ income security.
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Hi Dakshina
Do not explain PMFBY in the introduction, instead mention the purpose and importance of insurance to the farmers.
Then write about the PMFBY.
You have explained the role of PMFBY in a decent manner, keep it up.
Give proper heading, ‘reason for changes’ does not make any sense.
In your answer , you did not mention PMFBY 2.0 , it has been asked explicitly in the question, adhere to the demand of the question.
Concluding remarks are missing, conclude by mentioning the important role insurance plays in the farmers’ income security.
Keep writing, you will improve.