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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ economic-crisis-migrant- labour-bills-covid-19-change- 6671565/ - In the into, mention some figures indicating the rising proportion of jobs without employment security in India.
- In the body discuss the factors responsible like-large proportion of informal sector, regulatory norms, lack of growth in manufacturing etc. In the next part, suggest the measure like policy change, reforms in the labour laws, increasing the contribution of manufacturing in economy, skill education, policies for the employment security in the service sector etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the importance jobs with employment security in the country’s economic development.
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Hi Samiksha
Good introduction.
Instead of writing 2 lines, give heading- Factors responsible for employment security.
Headings and subheadings help you in fetching better marks.
Issues are discussed in a decent manner.
After writing the issues, write the impact also.
Then write the measures.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep writing, you will succeed.