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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/india-should- believe-in-the-eu/ article32094669.ece - In the intro, set the tone of answer by mention China’s rise and its tendency to challenge the international laws.
- In the body, mention commonalities between the two, like-enhancing strategic autonomy, global standing, interest in diversifying value chains and action on climate change, also mention the significance of relationship in economic terms and geopolitical terms which has gains more significance in the post-covid world.
- Conclude by stating how strong partnership would help both EU and India become global decision-makers.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have explained the common interests in a good manner.
It is economic, not economically. Avoid these type of errors.
Write about the opportunities for India,you can write that political conditions are favourable for India especially after the withdrawal of the United Kingdom and the Europeans recognise India’s role in helping provide peace and prosperity in the Indo-Pacific.
Rest of the content is good and well placed.
Avoid scribbling.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing ,you will succeed.
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Hi Taran
Good introduction .
Write the common interests in short, so that you can cover more aspects in the given word limit.
Write about the opportunities for India,you can write that political conditions are favourable for India especially after the withdrawal of the United Kingdom and the Europeans recognise India’s role in helping provide peace and prosperity in the Indo-Pacific.
Explain the significance of India-EU relationship .
Then conclude.
Follow a proper structure to get better marks.
Lackluster conclusion, you can write that a strong partnership would help both the EU and India become global decision-makers and tackle the challenges caused by the disruption of global order collectively.
Work on content.
Improve your handwriting.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
You have explained the common interests in a good manner.
The question is about bilateral relations so no need to write their issues in a separate heading.
Lack of content, write points in way forward like-
-The Indo-Pacific region is becoming contentious, so India should capitalise on its geopolitical leverage there.-Cooperation with like-minded, democratic powers can support this effort, especially towards assertive competitors like China.
-The EU as a whole offers more to India than the strongest bilateral relations with individual EU member states.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Avoid grammatical errors and work on presentation to get better marks.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart in explaining the common interests is appreciable.
Write about the opportunities for India,you can write that political conditions are favourable for India especially after the withdrawal of the United Kingdom and the Europeans recognise India’s role in helping provide peace and prosperity in the Indo-Pacific.
Cover different aspects, like write about the trade between EU and India-
The EU is India’s first trading partner and the biggest foreign investor,but there is still room for improvement especially when compared to EU investments in China .
Lackluster conclusion, conclude by stating how strong partnership would help both EU and India become global decision-makers.
Work on handwriting.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Mehul
Write short introduction.
First write about the common interests of EU and India-
-Both aim to enhance strategic autonomy and their global standing.
-Diversifying strategic value chains is also a common interest.
-Both seek to address the issue of climate change on an urgent basis.
Then write about the opportunities for India,you can write that political conditions are favourable for India especially after the withdrawal of the United Kingdom and the Europeans recognise India’s role in helping provide peace and prosperity in the Indo-Pacific.
Follow a proper structure,
Lackluster conclusion, conclude by stating how strong partnership would help both EU and India become global decision-makers.
Work on handwriting.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Amandeep
Good introduction.
Avoid writing such minute numerical data, this could go wrong.
You have explained the shared interests and concerns in a good manner.
But give proper heading , for example instead of writing ‘relationship’ , write ‘common interests’.
The content is good.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by stating how strong partnership would help both EU and India become global decision-makers.
Work on handwriting, write little small.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi PS
Scan your answer sheet in proper light.
You have explained the common interests in a decent manner.
Concerns and significance are well explained, keep it up.
The content is good and well placed.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
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Hi Unnati
Good introduction.
Universal values and common interests are different, write the common interests shared by EU and India in short, you can write –
-Both aim to enhance strategic autonomy and their global standing.
-Diversifying strategic value chains is also a common interest.
-Both seek to address the issue of climate change on an urgent basis.
Then write the significance and concerns.
Good conclusion.
Work on structure of the answer to fetch better marks.
Improve your handwriting.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Work hard, you will improve.