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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/seizing-the- moment-at-the-who/ article31733278.ece - In the intro, briefly mention the role of the WHO executive board.
- In body, you can mention the elements that should form the basis of policy approach, for example- focus on prevention of epidemic, review of the WHO and China’s initial response, equitable access to vaccine and patent pooling, avoid getting entangled in Taiwan membership issues etc.
- Conclude by highlighting the importance of opportunity for India to shape the global response and inform its policy decisions.
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Hi Deepika
Mention some more points about the executive board of WHO.
Well structured answer.
Content is diversified.
Improve your handwriting,avoid scribbling
Also explain in brief how this leadership will navigate the global politics over the next 3 years .
Overall good attempt.
Keep it up!
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Hi Dakshina
In introduction briefly mention the role of the WHO executive board.
You have deviated from the demand of the question.
Brainstorm before writing.
You have written the complete answer around WHO working ,
Explain what should be India’s policy approach while heading the board .
And also mention the opportunities for India.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Vishesh
Your introduction is too long.
Try to write crisp and concise so that you can add more content.
Also explain in brief how this leadership will navigate the global politics over the next 3 years .
Work on handwriting ,write neat and legible.
A good attempt but need to work on content
Keep writing!
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Hi Teja
Your answer is well structured.
Content is diversified .
Also mention in brief the challenges and opportunities for India in this leadership.
Avoid using short forms like exe for executive.
Conclusion is good.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep it up !
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Lackluster introduction.
In introduction,briefly mention the role of the WHO executive board.
Mention briefly the challenges for India and how to tackle them.
Good conclusion.
Your answer is according to the demand of the question,keep it up.
Improve your handwriting,avoid scribbling.
Work on basic grammar.
You can write good answers,keep practicing.
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Hi Sneha
In introduction briefly mention the role of the WHO executive board.
Briefly explain the history of India and WHO in two lines.
You have explained the India’s approach in a decent manner.
You can write that India can put a global ban on consumption of wild animals to avoid these type of virus spread in future.
Explain briefly how this leadership is an opportunity for India.
Good conclusion.
Content is good and well placed.
Overall a decent answer.
Keep writing,you will succeed.