Mentors Comment:
- You must have come across the commentaries on Indian secularism for the last couple of years in various newspapers, blogs and magazines. It’s the hot topic right now and it’s in crisis. This question is based on that theme, albeit with a little bit of change. It’s not asking about crisis in secularism in isolation but in the context of state-religion relationship in India. So the question asks: what is that crisis; why is that crisis and what can be done in order to separate state and church completely.
- Start with intro of Indian secularism, its distinct features that will have state-religion relations in main focus. Then in the next part, explain what is the problem with this state-religion mix. The main answer is the last part, where you will discuss what needs to be done to improve upon the situation – that we need new secularism and what would that be.
Answer:
Nehru’s view was that there should be equal protection by the state to all religions. He wanted a secular state to be one that protects all religions but does not favor one at the expense of others and does not itself adopt any religion as the state religion. Therefore Indian secularism is fundamentally different from western secularism. It does not focus only on Church-State separation and the idea of inter-religious equality is crucial to the Indian conception. But contemporary political and social history is replete with incidents which compel us to revisit our secularism.
Features of Indian Secularism and State-Religion interaction:
- A distinctive feature of Indian secularism is that it rejects the ‘wall of separation’ between state and religion but demands that the state keep a ‘principled distance’ from all religions.
- Unlike the ideology of the American wall of separation, in India legitimate principled intervention of the state in religion and vice versa is constitutional.
- The two are distanced but not completely separated.
- The Indian Constitution allows the state to play a legitimate role in the affairs of religion. e.g Article 25 permits the state to regulate/restrict the secular activities of the religion
- Likewise, it permits religious considerations to sometimes enter governance.
What is the problem with the present secularism:
- India is facing challenges to keep secularism alive in the form of communalism (communal violence), politicization of caste and religion, the rise of fundamentalism and obscurantism, etc.
- Our brand of secularism, based on states’ active engagement amid stated religious neutrality, has led to the appeasement of a few, but empowers none and brings injustice for all.
- Lack of separation of religion and state has eaten away at India’s religious amity.
- Governments engage in all sorts of religious activities and play favorites.
- They own and operate places of worship, fund religious schools, grant tax exemptions to religious outfits, award them government contracts, allot them public lands, and take people on religious pilgrimages.
- Instead of uniting our society, it has fomented fragmentation and alienation among our diverse religious communities.
- The majoritarian sentiments have now risen against what they perceive as years of over-accommodation of the minorities. This puts the country at risk of losing its tolerant and pluralistic democracy.
- Without constitutional restrictions on state sponsorship of religious activities, Indian secularism turned into a carte blanche for governments to do as they pleased.
- They began exploiting religious communities with special treatment, sops, and populist slogans.
Steps needed to remedy the present crisis of state-religion conundrum:
- India today desperately needs a new definition of secularism, one based on freedom of religion, equality before the law, and separation of religion and state.
- This time we must adopt genuine secularism, with all three essential ingredients: freedom, equality, and separation. Freedom of religion is already enshrined in India’s Constitution. Work is needed on the other two, and they must be enacted through legislation.
- For religious equality before the law, we must pass a uniform civil code.
- Ensure that all government benefits (subsidies, aid, welfare, etc) are distributed under uniform rules.
- Repeal all religious privileges granted under the Criminal Procedures Code of the country. This would ensure that states’ police powers and assistance are applied on a uniform basis.
- India should pass a constitutional amendment along the lines of the First Amendment of the US Constitution: that Parliament “shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof.”
Any attempt by anyone to say that separation of religion and state is not needed because their religion is secular by nature, is disingenuous. And even if that were true, the community would have nothing to lose or fear if the law of the land reaffirms its secular credentials. Religion is surely a personal matter, in which politicians, legislators, and bureaucrats do not belong. Our current variety of secularism has only led to abuse by our politicians, violence on our streets, and mischief in our courts. It is time for India to adopt secularism 2.0.
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The main body of the answer is very good.
Yur points are exhaustive and well covered.
Good language.
But discuss the steps needed to remedy the present crisis of state-religion conundrum.
Then only conclude your answer.
Underline the key points
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A very large and ambiguous discussion on the 1st page of the answer.
That is not required.
Start with intro of Indian secularism, its distinct features that will have state-religion relations in main focus. You can skip the 2nd paragraph of the answer completely.
Then in the next part, explain what is the problem with this state-religion mix. The main answer is the last part, where you will discuss what needs to be done to improve upon the situation – that we need new secularism and what would that be.
That should be the ideal structure.
The 50% of your discussion was regarding the Indian secularism and its distinctiveness with the western concept of secularism.
The rest 50% covered what should have been the main body of the answer.
That is not the ideal; structuring of the answer.
Your main body should have a complete focus on the issue in hand.
Read the model answer.
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You completely misunderstood the demand of the question.
Please read the mentor’s comments carefully to get the hold of the demands and structure of the question.
It’s not asking about crisis in secularism in isolation but in the context of state-religion relationship in India. So the question asks: what is that crisis; why is that crisis and what can be done in order to separate state and church completely.
Start with intro of Indian secularism, its distinct features that will have state-religion relations in main focus.
Then in the next part, explain what is the problem with this state-religion mix.
The main answer is the last part, where you will discuss what needs to be done to improve upon the situation – that we need new secularism and what would that be.
Read the model answer
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The answer is vague in terms of discussion and the content.
The structure lacks coherence and needs a revisit.
The overall content lacks depth and its juts touching the tip of the iceberg.
Also, discuss the steps needed to remedy the present crisis of state-religion conundrum.
Then only conclude your answer.
Read the model answer
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Poor presentation.
The whole structure is mixed due to the frequent cutting and nonclarity with the subheadings.
Avoid such writing.
Use plain paper to write answers to get better hold of the presentation and alignment needed in the answer.
The content is decent but with this style, you will not be getting many marks.
So start focusing on your presentation.
Use proper subheadings and underline imp keywords
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You misunderstood the demand of the question.
It would have been a great answer if the question was about the issues with secularism in India.
But the actual demand is something else.
It’s not asking about crisis in secularism in isolation but in the context of state-religion relationship in India.
So the question asks: what is that crisis; why is that crisis and what can be done in order to separate state and church completely.
Start with intro of Indian secularism, its distinct features that will have state-religion relations in main focus.
Then in the next part, explain what is the problem with this state-religion mix.
The main answer is the last part, where you will discuss what needs to be done to improve upon the situation – that we need new secularism and what would that be.
The 2nd part of the answer does some justice to the demand of the question but it still needs more talking points regarding the state-religion nexus.
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The direction of the answer is very good.
You got the hang of the question.
But the content in the 1st part, where you discussed the issues with current state-religion nexus needs more content and more points.
For it, read the model answer.
The 2nd part is dealt with nicely.
The structure is very good.
Underline the imp stuff.
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A very good discussion overall.
You got the demand of the question perfectly.
Good content in the main body.
The structure is superb.
But avoid large statements.
Generally, your statements should be around 10-12 words.
The last part is not called way forward. It is a conclusion actually.
Way forward means the steps or solutions needed further, which you discussed in the part prior to it.
Very good intro.
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A very good intro.
The overall discussion is very good.
You kept the demand of the question at the center stage and never veered away.
The balance between both parts of the main body is perfect.
Some of the very best way forward for the question.
The only scope of improvement is that in the intro, do mention some of the constitutional provisions regarding secularism; as in which articles and parts talk about secularism.
Decent conclusion.
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The answer is good in terms of direction but it lacks content and depth.
The structure is missing in the answer.
As mentioned in the mentor’s comments, after explaining what is the problem with this state-religion mix, the main part of the answer will come which will be the last part, where you will discuss what needs to be done to improve upon the situation – that we need new secularism and what would that be.
That way forward is missing in the answer.
The 1st part is very good.
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A very good answer Paran.
The overall content is very good.
Your structure is the best part of the answer.
It is good that you divided the issues with the current form of secularism into social and political subheadings.
The solutions are superb.
The last part is not called way forward. It is a conclusion actually.
Way forward means the steps or solutions needed further, which you discussed in the part prior to it.
Nice presentation and language in the answer.
Keep writing
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Good intro and great use of the diagram.
All in all, a very good discussion.
The division of points in various subheadings is very good.
That is the best part of the answer.
That gives clarity.
The way forwards are very good.
Avoid giving subheading to your conclusion.
The language is very good and the explanation is crisp
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A very good intro in terms of content bu avoided writing such a lengthy statement. Your paragraphs should not be based on a single statement.
Generally, your statements should be around 10-12 words.
Do not discuss the basic features of Indian secularism in such length. Keep it brief and focus on the main body of the answer.
The first part of the main body would have been great if the question was about the issues with secularism in India.
But the actual demand is something else.
It’s not asking about crisis in secularism in isolation but in the context of state-religion relationship in India.
Read the model answer for that.
The 2nd part is very good.
The content in it is superb.
But again, avoid large statements. Otherwise, you will not have the crispness in your points and sometimes it may lead to over-explanation.
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The direction of the answer is very good.
You got the hang of the question.
But the content in the 1st part, where you discussed the issues with current state-religion nexus needs more content and more points.
For it, read the model answer.
The 2nd part is dealt with nicely.
The structure is very good.
Underline the imp stuff.
Do highlight your subheadings and keep a fair distance between changing points and subheadings