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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/lessons-from- vietnam-and-bangladesh/ article33060511.ece - In the intro, mention the importance of diversified growth.
- In the body, discuss the importance of growth in which diverse sectors of the economy register growth instead of certain sectors. In the next part, discuss the issues with the export-driven growth like vulnerability to the economic crises in the world and lack of gain of foreign exchange etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for diversified growth which makes the economy resilient.
tiwarisamiksha6@gmail.com
Hi Samiksha
Good introduction.
Quoting examples of Vietnam and Bangladesh is appreciable but try to link them with the first paragraph.
You need to work on content.
How lack of foreign exchange is an obstacle in export growth, substantiate this point instead of writing bullet points.
Good conclusion.
Start the sentences with capital alphabets.
Keep writing, you will improve.
kshitijkmr1@gmail.com
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Hi Kshitij
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Good introduction.
You have written very good points in benefits and issues, but instead of writing bullet points, substantiate each of them in one-two lines.
Good conclusion.
Content wise good attempt.
Give proper headings and subheadings, it will help you in presenting your answer in a better structured manner.
Underline keywords.
Try to write all the four answers on a regular basis.
Keep writing , you will improve.
divyaloyola13@gmail.com
Hi Divya
Good introduction.
You have mixed the points, in the importance, some of the points are issues like point no.4 and 5.
Issues are discussed in a good manner.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Good conclusion.
Try to write under subheadings.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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