Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/recalibrating- relations-with-eu/ article33974083.ece - In the intro, mention the democratic thread running between the two.
- In the body, mention growing assertiveness of China in the region which necessitates India to look for partners, India also stands to benefit from big market size of the block, cooperation on climate change, security, technology, trade and investment etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to deepen the ties between the two for mutual benefits.
@Parth
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Hi Surya
Good intro but try to club it in one single paragraph.
After the intro , give a proper heading.
Content wise good attempt.
Covering various dimensions is appreiable.
Need to work on presentation.
Good conclusion.
Leave space between the paragraphs.
@Parth
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Hi Deepika
Good intro.
Thumbs up for the content.
Decent structure.
A good attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep working hard.