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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/india- atmanirbharta-space- pharmaceuticals-isro-brazil- satellite-launch-covid- vaccine-export-211595/ - In the intro, mention how India has been successful in developing vaccine for Covid and providing it to the other countries.
- In the body, mention India’s success in the field of space and pharma. Next mention the factors affecting such replication in other areas: talent drain, competition from China, lack of vision in policies, unwise capital allocation etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to focus on replicating the success of space industry in the other areas of the economy.
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Hi Komal
Good intro.
Try to give a heading after the intro.
Substantiate the India’s strong points in 1-2 lines each.
Thumbs up for the presentation.
Try to write subjectively.
Conclude by mentioning the need to focus on replicating the success of space industry in the other areas of the economy.
Keep writing.
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Hi Surya
Good intro.
Try to give a heading after the intro for better structure.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Content wise good attempt.
Good structure.
Keep working hard.
@Parth
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Hi Deepika
Covering multiple dimensions is appreicable.
Good intro.
Thumbs up for the content and presentation.
A good attempt, crisp and concise, keep it up.
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Hi Vaidehi
Good intro, try to give heading after the intro for better presentation.
Content wise good attempt.
Need to work on presentation.
Leave proper space between the paragraphs.
Keep writing.