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- https://www.google.com/amp/s/
indianexpress.com/article/ opinion/columns/national- statistical-office-india-gdp- trade-revenue-6603891/lite/ - In the intro, mentions the economic disruption caused by the pandemic across the world.Â
- In the body, discuss the opportunity India could utilise to increase its share in the global trade. But doing so would require several reform- like labour laws, regulatory hurdles, multiple compliances, dispute resolution, consistent policies etc.Â
- Conclude by mentioning the need to fast track these reforms.
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Hi Samiksha
Good introduction,quoting NSO data is appreciable.
Content is good in the opportunity part but write some reforms also like reforms in labor laws etc.
Concluding remarks are good .
A good attempt.
Leave some space between the paragraphs.
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