Mentor’s comment-

• Introduce with the how Italy was fragment across various principalities and the need for unification.
• The body should elaborate on Mazzini and his contribution in kindling Italian Nationalism. The contributions of Garibaldi and his red shirts must also be added and also the disagreement
  between Cavour and Garibaldi.
• The conclusion touch upon how others such as King Victor Emmanuel also played a part in unification process but the above mentioned three were its heart, brain and sword.