Mentors Comments:
1. Define land degradation and the various forms of it.
2. Mention how land degradation takes place – very briefly
3. Establish the clear link between land degradation and climate change impact: changing monsoons, food security, climate stress on agriculture
4. Suggest ways to achieve LDN status
https://www.thehindu.com/opinion/op-ed/a-new-ethics-for-a-sustainable-planet/article29316564.ece
Answer:
Land degradation is the deterioration or loss of the productive capacity of the soils for the present and future. It is a global challenge that affects everyone through food insecurity, higher food prices, climate change, environmental hazards, and the loss of biodiversity and ecosystem services. Land degradation is happening at an alarming pace, contributing to a dramatic decline in the productivity of croplands and rangelands worldwide.
As per ISRO’s Atlas maps degradation and desertification, land degradation area totaled 29.3% of India’s total land area, representing an area of 96.4 million hectares. The land degradation is imperative for curbing climate change because-
The degrading land resources globally and its impact on furthering negative effects of climate change. The better management of the world’s farms and forests is necessary to tackle climate change.
The IPCC report warns that clean energy, clean transport and reducing emissions alone will not cut global emissions enough to avoid dangerous warming beyond 2 degrees Celsius.
It points out that the global food system is responsible for 21 to 37 percent of the world’s GHG emissions.
The correlation between land degradation and climate change are as follows
Land degradation is both a cause and consequence of climate change. When land is degraded, it becomes less productive, restricting what can be grown and reducing the soil’s ability to absorb carbon. This exacerbates climate change, while climate change in turn exacerbates land degradation.
Rapid agricultural expansion has led to the destruction of forests, wetlands and grasslands and other ecosystems thus boosting global warming.
Soil erosion from agricultural fields, the report estimates, is 10 to 100 times higher than the soil formation rate.
Land serves as a sink for carbon, because healthy ecosystems and soils can absorb carbon from the atmosphere. Between 2007-2016, these sinks removed 28% of total human carbon dioxide emissions from the air — an important barrier to even more severe climate change.
However, degraded land does not have the capacity to absorb carbon; it can actually release carbon. And it’s possible that climate change and human activities could damage land to the point where it becomes a net source of carbon emissions.
Agriculture, forestry and other types of land use account for 23% of human greenhouse gas emissions. At the same time natural land processes absorb carbon dioxide equivalent to almost a third of carbon dioxide emissions from fossil fuels and industry.
Land must remain productive to maintain food security as the population increases as well as the negative impacts of climate change on vegetation increase.
Food security will be increasingly affected by future climate change through yield declines – especially in the tropics – increased prices, reduced nutrient quality, and supply chain disruptions.
Impact on local/regional climate: Land degradation significantly affect climate due to land surface changes that impact temperature and rainfall.
Dust storms: increased frequency and severity of dust storms is one of the manifestations of land degradation; particularly in drylands.
Way Forward:
Sustainable Land Management (SLM) is crucial to minimizing land degradation, rehabilitating degraded areas and ensuring the optimal use of land resources for the benefit of present and future generations.
Watershed Management: To combat soil loss by water erosion it is important to undertake watershed management initiatives including afforestation and other programmes aimed at checking soil erosion, improving soil moisture, increasing recharge, stabilizing river basins and making agriculture and communities climate resilient
Reducing Severity of degradation/desertification: proper land use policy, protection of prime agricultural lands and regular monitoring of highly vulnerable areas should be taken up to reduce severity.
Landscape Restoration: Measures should be taken to assist in ecological restoration. For example, natural regeneration can be supported through the development of community grazing plans that include seasonal rest.
Soil Conservation Practices: Soil conservation practices should be taken up to prevent or reduce physical loss.
The concept of Land Degradation Neutrality (LDN) has been adopted under SDG.
Many schemes Rashtriya Krishi Vikas Yojana, Pradhan Mantri Krishi Sinchayee Yojana, etc has been launched to mitigate concerns over desertification and land degradation.
It is important to secure land rights and access to natural resources for the poor. Further, alternative livelihood opportunities should be provided to rural poor in vulnerable areas.
Today we need an urgent transformation in land use. Priorities include protecting and restoring natural ecosystems and moving to sustainable food production and consumption. The costs of inaction will be catastrophic.
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Underline important points in your answers.
Very good intro.
But you do not need to discuss the reasons for land degradation in that much detail. that should be covered in a brief manner.
One important aspect that you missed in the land degradation and climate change link-up is that good land absorbs carbon emissions while degraded land is the source of carbon release, which in turn, speeds up the process of climate change.
Very good way forward.
The discussion in the main body is very good apart from that missing carbon link.
Good explanation and flowcharts.
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Try to write on paper with a pen. That will help you immensely.
The content of the answer is quite decent.
Good use of flowchart.
Decent way forwards.
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Rather using “” in your answer, you can use flowcharts. That is a better way of structuring and presentation in the answer.
More and better points are needed in the main topic which is the link between climate change and land degradation.
One important aspect that you missed in the land degradation and climate change link-up is that good land absorbs carbon emissions while degraded land is the source of carbon release, which in turn, speeds up the process of climate change.
Read the model answer for more dimensions in the part.
Points in the way forward have a better tone in it but they can be explained in fewer words. Work on the economy of your statements.
That will help you make your answers short and relevant.
Good conclusion.
Please review and revert
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Hi Anmol
This structure and presentation is not suitable for a GS answer.
Work on it please.
Paragraphs are very lengthy and there is no subheading in it.
This is not an ideal format to answer.
Read the answers of Wasim or Sahithya to understand the importance of bullet points. They are using the same points as your but their style of presentation and structuring is more suited for the demand of UPSC.
You failed to discuss the most important aspect of the question which is, “establish the clear link between land degradation and climate change impact: changing monsoons, food security, climate stress on agriculture.”
You have to mention how both CC and LD feed off each other and its a vicious cycle.
Read the model answer for that.
Way forwards are decent.
Always read the mentor comments given below the questions to understand the suitable structure and breakages in the answer. that way you will be able to gauge the necessary direction of the answer.
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sir do we need to undeline the whole sentence or the part of sentence where it has more importnat words
thak you
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Underline only the important keywords. There is no point underlining all the statements otherwise it will be one big underlined answer!!! Underline reasons, suggestions, keywords etc in the discussion.
Also properly highlight your subheadings.
Avoid paragraphs in the main body. They are suited only for intro and conclusion.
Use proper subheading whenever you change the nature of the discussion. Like after intro, mention: Reasons for the land degradation. that way, the examiner can notice the change of the discussion.
Either use flowchart or use explanation. Do not use both in the same subheading. There is no point in flowchart when you have discussed the same points in your explanation of that subheading. I am talking about the link between LD and CC.
Overall the main body is very good.
You have covered almost all the dimensions of the topic but they can be explained in fewer words. Work on the economy of your statements.
That will help you make your answers short and relevant.
The conclusion is missing. Always make a habit of writing a conclusion. They are the soft landing of your answer.
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Towards the end of your answers, you have a tendency to write in the paragraph style. The content in them is mostly for the way forward. Avoid such structuring. That can be discussed n the bullet points through another relevant subheading.
Apart from that, the answer is good.
The 1st part can be explained bit more.
The 2nd part is very good.
It has all the angles needed.
Very detailed points are there.
Structuring is fine.
Good use of flowchart. That way you kept the discussion very brief.
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Decent intro.
Good use of flowchart after intro.
One important aspect that you missed in the land degradation and climate change link-up is that good land absorbs carbon emissions while degraded land is the source of carbon release, which in turn, speeds up the process of climate change.
More and better way forwards were needed. read the model answer for that.
Very good conclusion.
Overall nice language and decent structure.
Work on giving more content in the same space.
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Very good intro.
But you do not need to discuss the reasons for land degradation in that much detail. that should be covered in a brief manner.
Overall the main body is very good.
You have covered almost all the dimensions of the topic but they can be explained in fewer words. Work on the economy of your statements.
That will help you make your answers short and relevant.
Don’t write subheading for the conclusion! That is inherent in the structure!
Good structure
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No need to discuss the visible impact of CC around us.
The main body discussed only the carbon sink aspect of CC and LD. But there many more links between CC and LD. Read the model answer for that.
Good use of the diagram.
After intro, briefly mention the reasons for LD.
Way forwards are better.
Read the model answer for the 1st part of your answer.
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You do not need to discuss the reasons for land degradation in that much detail. that should be covered in a brief manner.
You failed to discuss the most important aspect of the question which is, “establish the clear link between land degradation and climate change impact: changing monsoons, food security, climate stress on agriculture.”
You have to mention how both CC and LD feed off each other and its a vicious cycle.
Read the model answer for that.
Way forwards are decent.
Always read the mentor comments given below the questions to understand the suitable structure and breakages in the answer. That way you will be able to gauge the necessary direction of the answer.
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