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- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/reform-land- ceiling-laws-incentivise- farmers-for-agro-ecological- plantations-and-agro-forestry/ 2113635/ - In the intro, briefly mention the importance of soil for sustainable development.
- In the body, describe the various factors responsible for the degradation of soil like agricultural, industrial and commercial factors, urbanisation etc. In the next part, suggest the various ways to deal with it- policy changes, regulation of industries and industrial pollutants, encouraging farmers for the adoption of sustainable practices etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to check the degradations of this important resource which lest it could threaten our existence.
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Hi Samiksha
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart in explaining importance of soil is appreciable.
When you write causes of soil degradation, instead of including it in a sentence, give heading then write your points under subheadings.
Suggested strategy is decent.
Good conclusion.
Leave some space between the lines and paragraphs.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Geetanjali
Good introduction.
You have met the demand of the question in a decent manner.
Use of flow chart in explaining the reasons of land degradation is appreciable.
Content is decent.
Thumbs up for the structure.
Good conclusion.
Underline keywords.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep writing you will succeed.