Mentor’s comment-
- In introduction,you have to briefly highlight about the land reforms that have taken place in India post-independence.
- In the body discuss how land reforms were carried out post-independence and their results. Discuss the fact that only some state implemented it properly while the other sought to preserve the status quo. Discuss why land reform is an unfinished agenda – non modernization of land records, increasing fragmentation of land holdings etc. Discuss the steps being taken still to complete the task of land reforms.
- Conclude by discussing the importance of completion of land reforms and highlight way forward
Please review the answer.
Hi Dakshina
There is need to rephrase the introduction.
Lack of content in the body of the answer.
Mention steps taken to ensure distributive justice in India.
Use subheadings like impact of these reforms and weakness etc.
Make your answer presentable.
Work on content.
Plan the structure before writing.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Need to rephrase your introduction,grammatical mistakes are there.
You have deviated from the demand of the question.
Read mentor’s comment before writing,it will help you.
Question is demanding why land reforms in India failed and what are the consequences of the same.
Brainstorm before writing.
Work on content and structure.
Do not get demotivated by marks,keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Use of table to explain the land reforms is appreciable.
Also discuss the fact that only some states implemented it properly.
Try to cover more aspects to get better marks.
Cite reasons why it failed.
Conclusion is good.
Improve handwriting.
Keep writing.
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@Parth Verma :Sir please review 4 answers..
Hi
Introduction is missing.
Plan the structure before writing the answer.
Read mentor’s comment before writing.
Explain briefly the impact of the failure of land reforms and suggest some way forward.
Also mention the current status of the land reforms.
Try to diversify your answer.
Use proper subheadings.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Introduction is good
You have met the demand of the question.
Also discuss the fact that only some states implemented it properly.
Well structured answer.
Avoid using short forms .
Work on basic grammar and improve handwriting.
Overall good attempt.
Keep it up.