Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction you can explain briefly the demand of the case study.
- In the body identify the ethical questions involved in the case study first.
Explain what are the possible approaches that are available to resolve the situation.
Explain that global ethics and professional standards demand one to always act with integrity.
Being open and transparent are key to ethics at work.
Explain what the concerns are if Mr.X holds the information and doesn’t call out for it. - You can conclude by suggesting a suitable middle path and conclude with a balanced solution
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Hi Deepika
The case study is based on the principle of Integrity so write in accordance.
You have mentioned the consequences in a decent manner but also
think over it that the best course of action for Mr. X here would be to inform the HR panel and recuse himself from the interview panel.
In conclusion,write about how professionalism would be affected by the course of action of Mr.X.
Avoid scribbling .
Overall a decent attempt,keep it up.
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Hi
The case study is not about any dilemma ,its about integrity.
You have discussed the different options available to Mr.X but did not mention the best course of action for Mr.X.
Explain that global ethics and professional standards demand one to always act with integrity.
In concluding remarks,write a balanced solution for both Mr.X and MR.Y.
Work on presentation.
Avoid scribbling.
Work hard,you will succeed.
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Hi Venkatesh.
The case study is about integrity so write in accordance.
You have written a general answer.
For diversify it,you can explain that global ethics and professional standards demand one to always act with integrity.
In conclusion,write about how professionalism would be affected by the course of action of Mr.X
and then write a balanced solution for both of them.
Brainstorm before writing.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Lackluster introduction, explain briefly the demand of the case study.
Identify the ethical questions involved in the case study first.
Explain what are the possible approaches that are available to resolve the situation.
Explain briefly how being open and transparent are key to ethics at work.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
Read mentor’s comment before writing the answer, it will help you in writing better answers.
Conclusion is decent.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Work on content and presentation.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
First write some introductory lines, in this you can explain briefly the demand of the case study.
Write about the ethical issues involved in the case study like integrity .
You have written the possible approaches in a decent manner.
Also explain that global ethics and professional standards demand one to always act with integrity.
Work on concluding remarks.
Write a balanced solution and reassert the importance of integrity in the work culture.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Improve your handwriting, write neat and legible.
Keep writing,you will succeed.