Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/in-an-uncertain- world-a-seat-at-the-global- high-table/article31973275.ece - https://theprint.in/diplomacy/
india-set-to-be-unsc-non- permanent-member-says-will- bring-five-s-approach-to- world/436171/ - In the intro, briefly mention the structure of UNSC and what being a permanent and non-permanent member mean.
- In the body, as India’s priority mention dealing with the pandemic, counter-terrorism, issue of a permanent seat etc can be mentioned. And as an approach, mention India’s ‘Five S’ approach.
- In the conclusion mention the importance of India at UNSC as a consensus builder.
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Hi Taran
Make sure your facts are right, there are 10 non-permanent members.
You have not understood the demand of the question.
Explain how will India gain by getting elected to UNSC as non-permanent member. You can give points like -enhances hope for permanent seat,access to high diplomacy etc.
Then cite the challenges like lack of veto power,the pressure of work of Indian mission will also increase etc.
Then explain the ‘Five S’ strategy.
Then conclude.
Plan the structure before writing.
Work on basic grammar,it is must for you !
Improve handwriting.
Work hard.
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Hi Parakh
First explain the structure of UN then write about India.
Do not draw the lines between paragraphs.
You can demarcate by giving different headings or subheadings.
You need to avoid scribbling , try to write neat and legible.
Some goo points are there but also explain how will India gain by getting elected to UNSC as non-permanent member and what are the challenges.
Conclusion is good,keep it up.
Work on basic grammar and improve presentation to get better marks.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Instead of using word temporary, use non-permanent.
Good introduction.
Seems that you have covered less aspects, also write about the challenges that India will faced, write about the current situation like US election,Covid-19 and China etc then write how will India gain by getting elected to UNSC as non-permanent member.
Try to diversify your answer to get better marks.
Plan the structure before writing.
Thumbs up for Five S approach .
Avoid using short forms in your answer.
Conclusion is good.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing,you will succeed!
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Very well structured answer and deftly drafted
Hi NJ
In the introduction first explain the structure of UN then write about India.
You have explain the criticality of the situation in a good manner,keep it up.
After writing about the priorities of India ,explain briefly how will India gain by getting elected to UNSC as non-permanent member .
Conclusion is good.
Content is good and well placed.
You have the potential of writing good answers, join our Mains Guidance Program for betterment and quality enrichment of your answers.
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Hi Chester
Thumbs up for introduction.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
You have mentioned the challenges of contemporary world which is appreciable but also mention the challenges in the way of India after being elected .
Instead of using heading India’s role,use what should be the priority of India and what is the strategy.
It will make your answer more structured.
In the strategy part, mention Five S approach.
In GS-2 paper, always try to relate answers with current affairs.
Conclusion is good.
Work on basic grammar .
Work hard,you will succeed.
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Hi Mehul
Need to rephrase your introduction.
And try to link paragraphs and if not then give proper headings or subheadings.
Work on writing language.
In importance part,your first and third point can be merged in one,both talk about having a say n geo-political issues,so write crisp and concise so that you can cover different dimensions in the given word limit.
After writing India’s priorities, write the strategy that India should adopt,mention Five S strategy.
Always try to relate answers with current affairs.
Work on handwriting and basic grammar.
There should be a proper structure of the answer for better marks.
Conclude by suggesting some way ahead.
Work hard on content.
You can read mentor’s comment before writing,it will help you in writing good answers.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction but write full sentences like sign of trust of other countries on India.
You have given the heading ‘the background’ then you wrote about the contemporary world , use headings wisely. You can write background for …. .
You have mentioned the India’s priorities in a good manner but after writing about the priorities, explain briefly how will India gain by getting elected to UNSC as non-permanent member.
Lackluster conclusion,you can write the importance of India at UNSC as a consensus builder.
A decent attempt but work hard.
Keep writing.
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Hi Aastha
Good introduction.
You have mentioned the priorities and strategy in a decent manner.
Use of flow chart is good.
Overall content is diversified and well placed,keep it up.
You have the potential of writing good answers,you can join our Mains Guidance Program for quality enrichment of your answers.
A good attempt !
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing !
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Hi Teja
Crisp and concise introduction,keep it up !
In the critical time,you have mentioned low support from countries, write complete sentence, support to whom ?
Membership to African countries not continent, work on writing language.
After writing priorities, mention the strategy in a different subheading(also write about NORMS) then explain briefly how will India gain by getting elected to UNSC as non-permanent member.
In the conclusion, mention the importance of India at UNSC as a consensus builder.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing.
Work hard,you will succeed.
I liked your answer, perhaps you can have a look at NJ_00’s answer too, just to have another perspective.
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Hi NS
First thing,your answer looks monotonous, use headings and subheadings for better presentation.
In one paragraph,write the structure of UN , do not elaborate this.
You have explained the current situation but did not mention the strategy and way forward.
Seems you have write the answer in a hurry so work on handwriting and plan the structure before writing to get good marks.
Mention Five S approach and NORMS.
In the conclusion, mention the importance of India at UNSC as a consensus builder.
Avoid using short forms .
Read mentor’s comment before writing,it will help you.
Work on structure and presentation.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Sumona
In the introduction only ,write briefly about the structure of UN, no need to elaborate this as this is a 10 marker question.
Use different subheadings for priorities and strategy, do not mix .
Explain about the current world scenario like US election,Covid-19 and China etc and tell what will be the challenges for India .
Mention briefly some opportunities that how will India gain by getting elected to UNSC as non-permanent member.
Try to cover different aspects to fetch good marks.
Work on your handwriting, write neat and legible.
Give some space between paragraphs.
In the conclusion, mention the importance of India at UNSC as a consensus builder.
Keep writing !
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Hi Shubham
First thing, try to complete your answer in two pages as it is a 10 marker question so adhere to space limit.
Good introduction.
Explain the current world scenario and then explain the priorities and strategies.
Rest of the content is good and concise.
Avoid using short forms.
Good conclusion.
You have the potential of writing good answers,keep it up !
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Hi Vinay
Good introduction.
Explain the current world scenario and then explain the priorities and strategies.
You have explained the approach in a good manner,keep it up !
Write the significance also like as an elected member India will have a rare peep into the consultations chamber of the UNSC, which is closed to non-members of the Council.
Rest of the content is good and well placed.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing !
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Hi Sneha
In the introduction only ,write briefly about the structure of UN, no need to elaborate this as this is a 10 marker question.
You have directly mentioned the approach ,first explain the current world scenario like US election,Covid-19 etc. Then mention the priorities,then come to approach.
Plan the structure before writing the answer.
You can also read the mentor’s comment,it will help you.
Work on presentation, underline keywords to convince examiner easily.
Work on content.
Keep writing,you will improve.
Hi Saika, scan your copy in proper light then resend it.